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T O P I C R E V I E WNickiGI Met YouI met you, and the world melted awayI met you, and I wanted you to stayI met you, and my emotions opened up to meLike a river overflowing at the gatesI met you, and my dreams came aliveI met you, and I took a diveI met you, and I became meAnd became ready to put everything at stakeI met you, and the water came rushing inI met you, and you have been home since thenI met you, now I can’t stop thinking of youLike the water and her mistress, the moonI met you, the stallion of my dreamsI met you, and now this mare gleamsI met you, and we became twoAnd this two will become one soonMy prince, you have shown your face to meAnd soon, your princess I will beYou rode in on a metallic steedAnd swept me away to be one with meI met you, and you met meTogether as one we shall beWe are soul mates, this I can seeI am meant for you, and you are meant for meMysticMelody I liked reading this very much. NickiGthank you MysticMelody, and it was the first, original poem i have written since high school. i'm not a poet at heart so i was surprised with myself that i had the urge to write since i'm more of a sketcher, i like to draw...i guess i hadnt produced any art in so long that i needed to get somthing artful and creative out and i used my love for my soon-to-be husband as inspirationi had used some very meaningful symbols in it also. such as the water overflowing at the gate of the river, thats how i felt with my emotions, like they were blocked from me, and he held the key to that gate and he opened it up for me. also when i referred to him as a stallion its because his chinese zodiac sign is a horse. and the part of the prince and princess is because he said to me 'i'll treat you like a princess'ugh, stupid gemini ascendant....i done and went and explained everything.....*sigh* cant help it though...charmainec ------------------ quote:"What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies with in us." -- Ralph Waldo EmersonMysticMelodyI loved your explanation. 'Course I'm a Libra who trines with that Gem AC. NickiGLOL RandallBeautiful! You should write more. You can read some of my poetry on my MySpace blogs.Virgo-AriesArtistBeautiful one, Nicki I especially love the sheer simplicity of the flow, so very lyrical.RandallYep, it flows well. ------------------"The earth is not given to us by our mothers and our fathers, it is borrowed from our children."Randall*bump*------------------"The earth is not given to us by our mothers and our fathers, it is borrowed from our children."NickiGthank you ------------------put your foot down once, not stomp it over and overRandallYou should write more.------------------"Everything I eat has been proved by some doctor or other to be a deadly poison, and everything I don't eat has been proved to be indispensable for life. But I go marching on."--George Bernard ShawNickiGi have a story posted..a short story of course------------------put your foot down once, not stomp it over and over
I met you, and the world melted awayI met you, and I wanted you to stayI met you, and my emotions opened up to meLike a river overflowing at the gates
I met you, and my dreams came aliveI met you, and I took a diveI met you, and I became meAnd became ready to put everything at stake
I met you, and the water came rushing inI met you, and you have been home since thenI met you, now I can’t stop thinking of youLike the water and her mistress, the moon
I met you, the stallion of my dreamsI met you, and now this mare gleamsI met you, and we became twoAnd this two will become one soon
My prince, you have shown your face to meAnd soon, your princess I will beYou rode in on a metallic steedAnd swept me away to be one with me
I met you, and you met meTogether as one we shall beWe are soul mates, this I can seeI am meant for you, and you are meant for me
i had used some very meaningful symbols in it also. such as the water overflowing at the gate of the river, thats how i felt with my emotions, like they were blocked from me, and he held the key to that gate and he opened it up for me. also when i referred to him as a stallion its because his chinese zodiac sign is a horse. and the part of the prince and princess is because he said to me 'i'll treat you like a princess'
ugh, stupid gemini ascendant....i done and went and explained everything.....*sigh* cant help it though...
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quote:"What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies with in us." -- Ralph Waldo Emerson
------------------"The earth is not given to us by our mothers and our fathers, it is borrowed from our children."
------------------put your foot down once, not stomp it over and over
------------------"Everything I eat has been proved by some doctor or other to be a deadly poison, and everything I don't eat has been proved to be indispensable for life. But I go marching on."--George Bernard Shaw
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