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Ayelet | Once Upon A Time If there was no past I would never have trodden this broken path of selfish leaves and hearts yellow, brown and reddish thrown under your feet Great Caesar, your majesty Flying, I was shot to bleed through your chest a graceful butterfly one of your heart beats taking my leave And so you said you loved me
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mirage29 | What a most-colorful ode to love. That's just a Beautiful piece of writing, Ayelet. Love the way you pivot-- graced with turns and reversals... |
LF DX | Well, this is one of the best you wrote Aye, pretty amazing. |
mirage29 | ... (music) Once Upon A Time (Vic Damone) [2:27] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vUrmcEEnFwM |
Ayelet | Thanks Mirage and LF DX! |
Pearlty | Sadly beautiful to read, and the moment is articulated so well in this..
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thequeen | Hi Ayelet, I totally missed the essence of the poem. Can you explain it briefly to me. I read it quite a number of times but could not get to the core feelings here.I understood the first half but missed the second part of it. |
Ayelet | Thank you Pearlty Thequeen: concerning the second half - I am being sacrified on the altar of love. I am a flying butterfly who is shot, and I fleet to another world as I am also a single heart beat of my lover, who rules me, but is also ruled by my sacrifice.I am escaping his chest through bleeding, as the heart beat is leaving him. If his heart misses that beat, then he also misses me. All this complete the first half of the poem, where I am trodden by my ruler, sacrificed as well, and if this sacrifice is righteous, only he can tell... |
thequeen | Ok how beautifully you put it. But that's very deep indeed. Love it |
mirage29 | (breathtaking image! wow..., definition of 'intimacy'..., just wow) |
Randall | Arguably my favorite poem on here. *sniffle* |
Pearlty | Ayelet, your interpretation to thequeen a poem that stands in itself... |
Ayelet | Thank you all |
mirage29 | ..... (music) You Go To My Head (Ella Fitzgerald) [4:50] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ANyNbVKys_A |
Ayelet | Beautiful music {{Mirage}} |
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Randall | She's the music video queen. |
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Randall | Bump! |
Randall | Bump! |
Randall | Bump! |