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Ayelet | Temporary It was daylight. I was crying. I was suffocating in fear. The woman from upstairs accidentally told me "Good night" in midday. Is it a coincidence? And when I got out of prison, they sang on tv that my time has passed. But I still retained my love for cookies. So my desperation lasted for one minute. And so, it seemed, my life.
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Randall | Deep. |
mirage29 | Being wished Good-night during the mid-day? I think of the Land of The Midnight Sun, where the Sun never goes completely down-- so if you need to go to bed?, you say goodnight. The Sun. It rebounds. Only Shine ... and eat cookies! Temporary.... LOVE it. Your poems grow on me the more I think of them. You write 'complexly', my dear .. *~ .. "Put On The FULL Protective Armor of Light" May no Words heard as a Misspeak harm a single precious hair on your head. * Quell and Dispel the thoughts ... Wax .. like water rolls off a duck's feathers Guarded and Preserved .. like the gorgeous Protective skin-coat that protects the Lotus Flower Leaving only Gentle Fragrant Peace ... |
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Pearlty | Love this type of writing Ayelet. In the moment feelings yet after reading over a few times provokes deeper meaning. |
Ayelet | Thank you all Mirage, nice info about the midnight sun blessing. It could have been nice to watch. Used to have this longing. And thank you for blessing me. You are very kind I appreciate it so much.. |
thequeen | If it is a recent written poem of yours, i am not the best kind of judge to say, but since I only recently became a little more active on the forum, I can see your writing has gained more meaning and depth to it. Love it. Had to read it two-three times to interpret it. But still I want to get in your head and explore those meaningful neurons that give you the depth |
anonymidarkness | Whenever my meditation is going wrong, I read your poems...they get me back in tune again, they put a smile on my face every time I take a dip in them, for a moment I'm there |
Ayelet | Anonymidarkness, that is probably the greatest compliment I ever got. Thequeen, thank you, I saw your post just now. |
Randall | quote: Originally posted by anonymidarkness: Whenever my meditation is going wrong, I read your poems...they get me back in tune again, they put a smile on my face every time I take a dip in them, for a moment I'm there
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Randall | Well-said, thequeen. |
mirage29 | Ayelet ..... Please stay safe out there. Let us know if you're okay. Every time I see the news about violence breaking out with Israel, I feel concern for you. |
Ayelet | Hi Mirage, thank you very much for your concern. I am fine. Things are at peace where I am. |
Randall | quote: Originally posted by Ayelet: Hi Mirage, thank you very much for your concern. I am fine. Things are at peace where I am.
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