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T O P I C R E V I E WAyeletAlterationSombody's knocking at my doorI feel alive because he comes And takes my breath away'Tis a solemn solitude Filled with mice and what else I cry and a baby's bornIn another worldWhat could you have done for me? I need naught, let me beA Silhouette of shattered glasses over musing viewsHe, who has the gift of speaking, must beSilent now. Ravens weeping. IAm leaving bliss for what tastes betterIn a tongue undivided, uttered, altered in our mindAnd everybody laughs mirage29Wow. That's powerful, and puzzle-like. Reminds me of the kinds of things Linda writes about? The issues revolving around immortality.This was a Goober~like treat.., and yet, leaves me with a kind of shudder or a chill. So good to see your Creative Work, Ayelet! Randall Ayelet RandallYes, very Gooberz-like.LF DXIt's quite puzzling what you've done with this, kind of different of what you write, but it's quite good.Randall quote:Originally posted by LF DX:It's quite puzzling what you've done with this, kind of different of what you write, but it's quite good.
Sombody's knocking at my doorI feel alive because he comes And takes my breath away
'Tis a solemn solitude Filled with mice and what else I cry and a baby's bornIn another world
What could you have done for me? I need naught, let me beA Silhouette of shattered glasses over musing views
He, who has the gift of speaking, must beSilent now. Ravens weeping. IAm leaving bliss for what tastes betterIn a tongue undivided, uttered, altered in our mind
And everybody laughs
Reminds me of the kinds of things Linda writes about? The issues revolving around immortality.
This was a Goober~like treat.., and yet, leaves me with a kind of shudder or a chill.
So good to see your Creative Work, Ayelet!
quote:Originally posted by LF DX:It's quite puzzling what you've done with this, kind of different of what you write, but it's quite good.
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