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T O P I C R E V I E WthequeenDelve into me and pretend you have never seen,The violent flames that burn in their souls,And please walk with me till the end of tunnel,Where I fiercely fight for my own shadow,The darkness engulfs the silence of light,And twinkles with its soul adeptly to rise,And holds your hands to sing of its glory,The darkness describes the Bible holy,Enchanted with its prayer I run and cry,“Hey darkness, stop,” don’t turn me blind,But look it elopes, trying to swallow the light,There is mercy on earth, howsoever it tries.AyeletBeautiful, thequeen, so full of hope and courage. Good to see you here thequeenThank you Ayelet, I plan to start writing meaningful verses.PearltyBeautifully dark, love this mirage29[QUOTE]Originally posted by thequeen:Delve into me and pretend you have never seen,xAnd please walk with me till the end of tunnel,xThe darkness engulfs the silence of light,xAnd holds your hands to sing of its glory,xEnchanted with its prayer I run and cry,xBut look it elopes, trying to swallow the light,xxxxThe violent flames that burn in their souls,xWhere I fiercely fight for my own shadow,xAnd twinkles with its soul adeptly to rise,xThe darkness describes the Bible holy,x“Hey darkness, stop,” don’t turn me blind,xThere is mercy on earth, howsoever it tries.yyy Hi Thequeen! Good to see you posting verse again. I found your verses quite interesting, while it kept shifting back and forth for me.So I took the liberty of taking every other verse {marked with x }, and layered them together. As you might see? Every other line seemed to belong together in a similar energy?? For me, was almost as though one line is a tiny more masculine, while the other may seem a bit more feminine? Not a difference until I stacked them together?What do you think? Am I off... ?Am I doing eclipse Moon energy??? LOL (right now)This is my favorite line. There is mercy on earth, howsoever it tries. (music) Lean On Me (Bill Withers, Glee Cast, lyrics) [4:13] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=81We8X91VtQ thequeen quote:Originally posted by Pearlty:Beautifully dark, love this Thank You Pearlty.Randall quote:Originally posted by Pearlty:Beautifully dark, love this thequeenmirage, I loved your take on the poetry. After you put the verses together it made better sense.For some reason I find it synchronous with the energy you elaborated. I was trying to describe it with the negative energy that opposes the positive one.Great musical btw mirage29{{ }} Randall RandallBump!Randall quote:Originally posted by thequeen:mirage, I loved your take on the poetry. After you put the verses together it made better sense.For some reason I find it synchronous with the energy you elaborated. I was trying to describe it with the negative energy that opposes the positive one.Great musical btw
Delve into me and pretend you have never seen,xAnd please walk with me till the end of tunnel,xThe darkness engulfs the silence of light,xAnd holds your hands to sing of its glory,xEnchanted with its prayer I run and cry,xBut look it elopes, trying to swallow the light,xxx
xThe violent flames that burn in their souls,xWhere I fiercely fight for my own shadow,xAnd twinkles with its soul adeptly to rise,xThe darkness describes the Bible holy,x“Hey darkness, stop,” don’t turn me blind,xThere is mercy on earth, howsoever it tries.
yyy
Hi Thequeen! Good to see you posting verse again.
I found your verses quite interesting, while it kept shifting back and forth for me.
So I took the liberty of taking every other verse {marked with x }, and layered them together. As you might see? Every other line seemed to belong together in a similar energy?? For me, was almost as though one line is a tiny more masculine, while the other may seem a bit more feminine? Not a difference until I stacked them together?
What do you think? Am I off... ?Am I doing eclipse Moon energy??? LOL (right now)
This is my favorite line.
There is mercy on earth, howsoever it tries.
(music) Lean On Me (Bill Withers, Glee Cast, lyrics) [4:13] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=81We8X91VtQ
quote:Originally posted by Pearlty:Beautifully dark, love this
Thank You Pearlty.
For some reason I find it synchronous with the energy you elaborated. I was trying to describe it with the negative energy that opposes the positive one.
Great musical btw
quote:Originally posted by thequeen:mirage, I loved your take on the poetry. After you put the verses together it made better sense.For some reason I find it synchronous with the energy you elaborated. I was trying to describe it with the negative energy that opposes the positive one.Great musical btw
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