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COMMANDER CONSTANT-HAZE | WHY PAINT PICTURES IN THE SKY... WHEN THE TELEVISION KEEPS ABSORBING ALL OUR TIME AND FEEDING US LIES... CLOSE YOUR EYES AND LET YOUR MIND SPIN 13'S THE NUMBER BURIED DEEP WITH-IN...ALL BETS ON THE TABLE, THE 12th SIGN MARKS MY LABEL...MY 3RD EYE WAS BLIND UNTIL I DELETED THE CABLE... HARMONIUOS IN SPACE THE 11 U CANT ERASE, NO OTHER NUMBER IN THE SYSTEM CAN TAKE ITS PLACE...10 CHIPS IN ,I RELEASE OUR SINS...GOTTA MAKE IT COUNT,9 LIVES TO SPROUT... THE 8 IS THE ONE WHO WILL STAND UP AND SHOUT.... LOOK TO THE HEAVENS , BEHOLD THE SPIRITUAL 7.... SO MAKE A WISH, AND PICK UP YOUR CRUXIFIX DONT FORGET THE LOVE OF THE NUMBER 6... THAT FELL FROM VENUS AND WILL ELIMINATE THE SPACE BETWEEN US... ONLY 5 NUMBERS LEFT, SPREAD THE MESSAGE AND CATCH YOUR BREATHE... 4 I HOLD THE KEYS TO SEND U PEACE IN THE BREEZE... I LOVE U ALL, WAKE UP, PLEASE, ALONE AND BEGGING ON MY KNEES... DO U REMEMBER THE 3 ..I HOPE U DO ITS THE EGYPTIAN PYRAMID THAT HOLD ALL THE CLUES... TO THE NUMBER 2 THAT BARKS AT THE MOON, CAN U FEEL THE LOVE THATS ABOUT TO BLOOM.... WHEW, WHAT A LONG TRIP , WERE ALMOST THRU DO U REMEMBER THE 1 THE SON......... WRITTEN 11/24/2007..BY MR. NOBODY
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SunnyRains | Very cool, did you write that?
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COMMANDER CONSTANT-HAZE | THANK YOU AND YES I DID.. I HAVE STACKS OF POERTY WRITTEN AND UNPUBLISHED.. GLAD U LIKED IT ILL POST A FEW MORE.... |
SunnyRains | Please do.. I love poetry! I write sometimes when I'm in a blue mood and need a good outlet.
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COMMANDER CONSTANT-HAZE | THIS ONE IS CALLED LIQUID SOULS from the depth of the ocean was born a sublime soul... one so sacred most would never know... for theres eyes were blind cause there hearts were closed... he wore a crown interwoven with a rose... did you know this soul that shined with gold... or were you blind and lived with no goals... not goals that built u a kingdom... but the ones that would unleash his freedom... i knew this soul so long ago and now his message is in the rock thats about to roll... down a mountain as high as the sky.... the only escape is for those who learn how to fly...... written 2/6/07 by DKA |
angel_of_hope | Very Nice Commander!! And Welcome to LL! Have you found the "Yellow Wax and the Ants" Forum ... it's for our budding poets/authors? You may want to post this there as well. |
Thorshammer | welcome and get that poetry done and published! |
COMMANDER CONSTANT-HAZE | THANK YOU ALL FOR THE COMPLIMENTS... BEING PISCES ITS PAINSTAKING TO DEAL WITH THE LEGAL MUNBO JUMBO,LOL..SO I HAVE NEVER TAKEN THE TIME ... BUT I HEAR WHAT YOUR SAYING IT TIME TO GET TO WORK ON IT.. |
COMMANDER CONSTANT-HAZE | HERES ANOTHER... CALLED TWIN SOULS... TWIN SOULS 1 WOKE TO A BEAUTY I WAS SUPPOSED TO KNOW... WE NEVER TOUCHED,BUT SOMEHOW U READ MY SOUL... OUR SUN WILL SHINE...YOU'LL ROCK MY RHYME...ITS THE IMPOSSIBLE MISSION OF STOPPING TIME... MAYBE SOME DAY WELL SWIM OR FLY,UP TO THE HEAVENS,LOVE WILL ALWAYS BE THE MOST POWERFUL WEAPON...YOU NEVER KNOW THE POWER WITH-IN, BUT YOU MUST DIG DEEP IN ORDER TO BEGIN... BREAKTHROUGH THE LIES OF FACT N FICTION...MY SOUL SCREAM FOR U LIKE A DRUG ADDICTION...MY SEARCH FOR YOU HAS BEEN AN ENDLESS MISSION... BUT MY TIME HAS COME NO MORE RESTRICTIONS...THE LOVE I CAN GIVE IS AN ENDLESS CONDITION...WALK WITH ME AND LETS KISSIN... written by DKA
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Charlotte | That's beautiful! |
Randall | ------------------ "Don't worry about the world coming to an end today. It's already tomorrow in Australia." Charles Schultz |
robyn.c | right on! |
Randall | Good stuff! ------------------ "The earth is not given to us by our mothers and our fathers, it is borrowed from our children." |
Randall | ------------------ "Cooking is like love. It should be entered into with abandon or not at all." Harriet Van Horne |
Ariefairy | where is COMMANDER CONSTANT-HAZE ? |
blonderiverkat | I just started to read some of his posts last night...I would like to hear more from him...it appears as if it's been awhil though... |