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Devilfish
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posted May 31, 2005 02:37 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Devilfish     Edit/Delete Message
The Unnamed

I JUST HAVE SUCH A LONGING IN MY HEART
A LONGING in my heart
LONGING in my heart
that it tears my soul apart
a fool confused still proud i stand
as you turn away your hand
a lump of coal within my chest
Hollow Heavy Dead in breast
leave no stone unturned but me
Blurr the Lines within my sea
Holy Howling from the torment
Pained Regret my wasted moment........
Dreaming
AND IT TEARS MY SOUL APART
IT TEARS my soul apart
TEARS my soul apart
this UNNAMED longing in my heart.

(RAM)

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Bluemoon
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From: Stafford, VA USA
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posted May 31, 2005 04:29 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Bluemoon     Edit/Delete Message

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26taurus
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posted May 31, 2005 04:29 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for 26taurus     Edit/Delete Message

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pixelpixie
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posted May 31, 2005 10:49 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for pixelpixie     Edit/Delete Message
*cries*

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SunChild
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From: Melb. Australia
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posted June 05, 2005 12:02 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for SunChild     Edit/Delete Message
I just read this..and I felt it, I actually felt tears welling up...I don't know why, but this fits me right now.
It feels like my song..wierd.

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"The dream was always running ahead of me. To catch up, to live for a moment in unison with it, that was the miracle." Anaïs Nin

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Bluemoon
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posted June 05, 2005 02:37 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Bluemoon     Edit/Delete Message
yes it does feel like a song.

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future_uncertain
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From: ohio
Registered: Aug 2004

posted June 05, 2005 07:39 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for future_uncertain     Edit/Delete Message
I've been thinking about this poem since you first posted it the other day. I think it says a lot when someone's words get stuck in your head like that.

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whiterabbit
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Registered: Aug 2004

posted June 05, 2005 08:55 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for whiterabbit     Edit/Delete Message
I agree,
it does ring in your ears once you finish reading it. Great writing!

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Devilfish
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posted June 06, 2005 07:43 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Devilfish     Edit/Delete Message
i cried when i wrote it
wow
im in awe that it was felt

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