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Topic: The Unnamed
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Devilfish Knowflake Posts: 147 From: Registered: Dec 2004
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posted May 31, 2005 02:37 PM
The UnnamedI JUST HAVE SUCH A LONGING IN MY HEART A LONGING in my heart LONGING in my heart that it tears my soul apart a fool confused still proud i stand as you turn away your hand a lump of coal within my chest Hollow Heavy Dead in breast leave no stone unturned but me Blurr the Lines within my sea Holy Howling from the torment Pained Regret my wasted moment........ Dreaming AND IT TEARS MY SOUL APART IT TEARS my soul apart TEARS my soul apart this UNNAMED longing in my heart. (RAM) IP: Logged |
Bluemoon Knowflake Posts: 965 From: Stafford, VA USA Registered: Feb 2005
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posted May 31, 2005 04:29 PM
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26taurus Moderator Posts: 8011 From: the stars Registered: Jun 2004
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posted May 31, 2005 04:29 PM
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pixelpixie Moderator Posts: 75 From: Ontario Canada Registered: Jun 2005
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posted May 31, 2005 10:49 PM
*cries*IP: Logged |
SunChild Moderator Posts: 1304 From: Melb. Australia Registered: Jan 2004
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posted June 05, 2005 12:02 PM
I just read this..and I felt it, I actually felt tears welling up...I don't know why, but this fits me right now. It feels like my song..wierd. ------------------ "The dream was always running ahead of me. To catch up, to live for a moment in unison with it, that was the miracle." Anaïs Nin IP: Logged |
Bluemoon Knowflake Posts: 965 From: Stafford, VA USA Registered: Feb 2005
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posted June 05, 2005 02:37 PM
yes it does feel like a song. IP: Logged |
future_uncertain Knowflake Posts: 1041 From: ohio Registered: Aug 2004
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posted June 05, 2005 07:39 PM
I've been thinking about this poem since you first posted it the other day. I think it says a lot when someone's words get stuck in your head like that.IP: Logged |
whiterabbit Knowflake Posts: 528 From: all over the place Registered: Aug 2004
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posted June 05, 2005 08:55 PM
I agree, it does ring in your ears once you finish reading it. Great writing!IP: Logged |
Devilfish Knowflake Posts: 147 From: Registered: Dec 2004
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posted June 06, 2005 07:43 PM
i cried when i wrote it wow im in awe that it was felt IP: Logged |