Posts: 1054
From: Stafford, VA USA
Registered: Feb 2005

posted June 09, 2005 10:01 AM         

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0 hugs everyday
0 nice thing for you to say
0 kisses on my lips
0 caresses from you finger tips
0 love for me from you
0 compation for why I feel blue
0 thanks yous when I do the things you ask of me
0 is what you think I am, I guess you’ll never see

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Posts: 147
From: Ontario Canada
Registered: Jun 2005

posted June 09, 2005 10:47 AM         

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I loved the ending.
Very empowering!

this part was a little funny....
'0 carcasses from you finger tips'

carcasses? That's actually a good thing in my book.
I love typos sometimes!

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Posts: 1054
From: Stafford, VA USA
Registered: Feb 2005

posted June 09, 2005 12:38 PM         

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I love you, girl!!! thanks for making me smile! I am in a lot of pain right now. I have lots of growing and changing to do. I have been writing alot!!!!!!!!!!! It helps. especially knowing that my friends are here to help me find my smile!

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From: north of Boston, MA
Registered: Aug 2004

posted June 09, 2005 08:29 PM         

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That sucks.

Not the poem,
the situation.

I'm sorry, bluemoon.

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From: ohio
Registered: Aug 2004

posted June 09, 2005 09:36 PM         

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OMG, HSC! I'm glad you clarified because I thought you being a bit brutal. Now I can't stop laughing!

Bluemoon... this is so sad. I also like the ending-- a ray of sunshine through the storm. Hang in there. I hope you find your way to better soon.

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Registered: Oct 2004

posted June 10, 2005 04:27 AM         

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Bluemoon, that is a very sad situation.
Just dont think much about what u dont have.
it may take time but eventually u will be happy

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You don't Love a Woman
because she is beautiful,
but she is beautiful
because you love her.

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From: Stafford, VA USA
Registered: Feb 2005

posted June 10, 2005 09:12 AM         

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I do manage to keep my chin up inspite of it.
I really love you guys! Thanks for letting me vent!

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