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Topic: "Rewrite"
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Virgo-AriesArtist Knowflake Posts: 157 From: Michigan :) Registered: Jun 2009
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posted November 25, 2010 12:55 AM
Reconfigure all I knew, painting pink over skies of grayish-blue Bring new light to the decrepit gloom, Implode old hauntings, let them not consume Paternal love has been there all along, cared best from a distance, yet deep-flowing and strong.
Mother who slayed all my dragons with heart, she is warm and affectionate, Connected right from the start. Along my way I thank the boys I've loved, They gave me each such special gifts, They taught me to feel deeper, in gripping clarity, then set me on my way, adrift.
I find a nurturance all it's own, in the love I have right now. We bring a mutual grounding light, in each other's eyes, inspiration without ensnaring flight.
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Randall Webmaster Posts: 4277 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Apr 2009
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posted November 25, 2010 10:23 AM
Vividly beautiful. ------------------ "The earth is not given to us by our mothers and our fathers, it is borrowed from our children." IP: Logged |
saronna Knowflake Posts: 148 From: Australia Registered: Jan 2010
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posted November 26, 2010 07:59 PM
publish this in your new bookIP: Logged |
Virgo-AriesArtist Knowflake Posts: 157 From: Michigan :) Registered: Jun 2009
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posted November 26, 2010 11:34 PM
Thanks for the feedback, my lovely Knowflakes What makes you mention me publishing a book, saronna? Just curious... IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 4277 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Apr 2009
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posted December 18, 2010 10:44 AM
------------------ "Everything I eat has been proved by some doctor or other to be a deadly poison, and everything I don't eat has been proved to be indispensable for life. But I go marching on."--George Bernard Shaw IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 4277 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Apr 2009
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posted January 07, 2011 07:30 AM
*bump*------------------ "Don't worry about the world coming to an end today. It's already tomorrow in Australia." Charles Schultz IP: Logged |