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Topic: Song for a lover
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whiterabbit Newflake Posts: 0 From: Registered: Sep 2009
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posted August 10, 2005 01:47 PM
(not the first or last or best or worst ever written, but it has its place in the universe, a little place though it may be) Did you know we are Bartlett pears, Waiting for our moment? I don’t know what sort of a dish one would use these in, But let’s suppose it’s a pudding. It was on some arbitrary counter-top That I encountered you (without the knife in your side at the time) And you were fresh. And I was hoping to be. The key here is: for a while we were both in the same place just a little kitchen, and we recognized each other but we are not the same fruit. I may be surprised at where I find myself, And you may be decorating a dessert now. If we had only met at the grocer’s, Perhaps we would be a pair in a basket in a room where someone humming while soaking their feet read The Thousand and One Nights
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Bluemoon unregistered
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posted August 11, 2005 07:56 AM
Always unusual and unexpected, Whiterabbit. IP: Logged |
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posted August 13, 2005 05:01 PM
whiterabbit, I love it! You are very talented. IP: Logged |
pixelpixie Newflake Posts: 8 From: ON Canada Registered: Apr 2009
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posted February 23, 2006 11:29 AM
I missed this before, so I am revisiting.. it has a lovely place in the Universe, I adore this!IP: Logged |
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posted February 25, 2006 01:05 PM
a comforting, beautiful place indeed. IP: Logged |
MysticMelody Moderator Posts: 1066 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted February 25, 2006 08:02 PM
I read it over and over *sigh* Stirred me deeply. IP: Logged |
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posted February 28, 2006 12:43 AM
wow!!! whiterabbit IP: Logged |
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posted February 28, 2006 01:05 PM
I love her style of writing. IP: Logged |
Mystic Melody Knowflake Posts: 35 From: IL Registered: Dec 2010
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posted January 19, 2011 10:57 AM
a really good one IP: Logged |
remixel-pixelpixie Knowflake Posts: 67 From: Registered: May 2010
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posted January 20, 2011 12:23 PM
Thanks for the :bump: I read it like the first time again!IP: Logged |