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Topic: Fight with an ego ( I hate to lose)
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pixelpixie
Newflake Posts: 8
From: ON Canada
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 27, 2005 02:26 AM
  
This rhymes.
Alot.
________________Oh we belted out our own lyrics.
No sheets within sight
I blasted inconsistencies
He forgot to shed our light
So God-damned high maintenance,
for such an easy chick
I usually ease my love disease
with a couple well placed licks
I drove the point across his face
when he stood there sweeping crumbs
the something he was born to do
was lost and he was numb
I can't believe you dropped this ball
we've practised it enough...
The rage that you invoked was something....
I forgot I did that stuff
I only asked you for your love
in the only way I know
I asked for reassurance in the softly lit beer-glow
but you couldn't find me in your head
you saw the floor-
my heart was dead
what more can a Leo riser ask-
But for you to bask?
and now
I drew conclusions
from your allusions
and my illusions
this intrusion
is not a thing I'd like to do again
We danced a chaotic primal beat
but not the kind that moves your feet
it takes your breath away in rage
your heart all trapped within a cage
I couldn't even move the energy to better use
I only sobbed myself to sleep, while you dreamed
of better women
(in my mind)
Even though.. you should find...
she's here when you pick up the glass
when I stick the apology up my ass
and say I'm sorry ( you stupid man)
and leave my ego where it lands IP: Logged |
sue g
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posted March 27, 2005 04:11 AM
I am definately not posting any more of my stuff after reading that.............why aren't you famous, or are you and I didn't know??? Brilliant, inspiring work Pixie, it really touched my Scorpio soul (and took me breathe away) XXIP: Logged |
greycat
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posted March 27, 2005 11:00 AM
agree with sue g... terrificIP: Logged |
26taurus
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posted March 27, 2005 11:58 PM
Superb.  IP: Logged |
LeoSweetHeart
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posted April 06, 2005 08:31 PM
 Pixie.. you take my breath away! I asked about your poem earlier then realized it was probably too personal if I had to wonder about it, so forget I asked k. IP: Logged |
Saturn's Child
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posted April 06, 2005 10:12 PM
Oh Pixie! Illusions...Allusions & Intrusions!! Superb!!!! Bravo!!!IP: Logged |
future_uncertain
Knowflake Posts: 193
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Registered: May 2009
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posted April 06, 2005 11:49 PM
That last line's a killer!IP: Logged |
calliope
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posted April 09, 2005 04:20 AM
Pixie for Poet Laureate IP: Logged |
future_uncertain
Knowflake Posts: 193
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Registered: May 2009
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posted June 05, 2005 07:44 PM
Here's another poem that gets stuck in my head. I love the title... it crosses my mind frequently. I had to take the opportunity today to revisit.Still love it. Last line got me again. IP: Logged |
Bluemoon
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posted June 05, 2005 07:51 PM
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pixelpixie
Newflake Posts: 8
From: ON Canada
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted June 06, 2005 12:55 AM
Oh thank you!
That's nice to hear.Gosh, I hated that fight. It was horrid, I had to purge it with words. Leave my ego where it lands?
I left it somewhere, I'm having a hard time finding it lately.... IP: Logged |
whiterabbit
Newflake Posts: 0
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Registered: Sep 2009
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posted June 06, 2005 08:45 PM
where'd it go, pixie?
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remixel-pixelpixie
Knowflake Posts: 71
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Registered: May 2010
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posted January 20, 2011 02:45 PM
Remembering the drama queen.
*snickerOh to grow! Such divinity. IP: Logged |
Lyra
Knowflake Posts: 241
From: London, UK
Registered: May 2009
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posted January 20, 2011 07:35 PM
Pixie, did you write more stuff since? I wanna know how you growed!! (usedta be on here a lot myself  ) Love Lyra IP: Logged |
SunChild
Moderator Posts: 1709
From: Melbourne. Victoria. Australia
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted January 21, 2011 02:45 AM
OMG I LOVE YOU!
Amazzing... I must have missed this little prize.------------------
“It’s an interesting thing. Seeing Kuan Yin relating to a flower so intently. She's not just looking at it; she's interacting with it…I’m seeing how the act of relating to a flower appears to be so simple. Yet, it takes a tremendous amount of courage to make such a “simple” act important. Now, the lotus is floating away.” IP: Logged |
Cancer/Scorpio729
Moderator Posts: 474
From: 6,000 feet above sea level
Registered: Feb 2010
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posted January 24, 2011 10:48 PM
Wow, this is beautiful. I love these kinds of poems with epic ending lines, and where nothing in the poem matches the title until you reach the end and say "Ohhhhhh".IP: Logged |
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