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From: MidWest :)
Registered: Jun 2009

posted October 19, 2012 07:30 AM            

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All that was meant has come to me
I release and realize, I set this free
I know I've learned how to cherish time
And take inspiration from a moment divine

I am glad I was there, and heard the call
it was refreshing to know the warmth doesn't pall
I take a step in utter peace
I've found the reason, and this storm will cease

It taught me and reached into a soothing place
reminded me how rhythm brings lasting grace
I leave today but always sense
Life could bring a fresh slate that's less intense

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From: Saturn next to Charmainec
Registered: Apr 2009

posted October 29, 2012 12:22 PM            

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Every storm passes. Nice rhyme scheme.

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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From: MidWest :)
Registered: Jun 2009

posted October 30, 2012 07:57 AM            

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Originally posted by Randall:
Every storm passes. Nice rhyme scheme.

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Thanks, Randall! I am having fun experimenting with new modes of rhyme, and glad to hear you enjoyed it

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posted October 31, 2012 12:24 PM            

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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From: Saturn next to Charmainec
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posted November 01, 2012 02:26 PM            

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Keep up the good work.

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From: derry
Registered: Nov 2012

posted November 15, 2012 02:18 PM            

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Excellent, love it!

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