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Topic: New Love
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thequeen Moderator Posts: 3968 From: Registered: Sep 2014
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posted January 10, 2017 10:51 AM
Life and shades, Dawning to skew, Freezing my wits, Surge these passions new, I do not know, What to name it's depth, Just living it's glory, Amidst the wreath, There are moments I freeze, There are moments I cry, Fantasizing your love, In bliss I die, Your eyes are pure, My love's ignited, I loose you yet, See this love united, Pondering your gaze, When I could not look, You gave me your heart, My heart you took, But a silence always, Possessed our heart, Distancing us piously, In ways so smart, You look in my eyes, And innocently speak, I look at you, Precious and meek, But cannot extend, To hold your hand, I have grip on you, Like falling sand, In my eyes you dwell, When I surge in night, You make bold moves, Show me your might, I switch my side, To hold my soul, Your presence scares, My being in whole, Your tender touch, That raises my whim, In dreams of you, I'm ecstatically brimmed, And look again, In your questioning eyes, I hide my love, But you read my lies..IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1720 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted January 11, 2017 10:10 AM
New growth, new thoughts, new love.. Lovely way with your words thequeen. IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 84426 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted January 12, 2017 11:52 AM
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thequeen Moderator Posts: 3968 From: Registered: Sep 2014
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posted January 13, 2017 10:53 AM
Thank you Pearlty and Randall for going through it..obliged.. IP: Logged |
Ayelet Moderator Posts: 2549 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted January 13, 2017 10:45 PM
Lovely poem thequeen, so full of depth and rich in imagery...IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 8248 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted January 14, 2017 04:50 PM
Passionate and sweet! IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 84426 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted January 21, 2017 04:51 PM
It rhymes well.IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1720 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted July 20, 2017 10:27 AM
Happy Birthday thequeen!! IP: Logged |
whitewitch111 Knowflake Posts: 3567 From: Hillsboro, OR, USA Registered: Jan 2013
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posted August 30, 2017 06:23 AM
I relate so well to what you are conveying. Your words are touching, you know exactly how to pare. Pious isn't a word we would think of when thinking of love but it is amazing how you perfectly blend the word with your conveying of love lost. IP: Logged | |