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MetalAphrodite
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posted May 12, 2017 03:42 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for MetalAphrodite     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
"refrain reframe"

I said I love him
But does he love me?
The glass in my heels
Dig at my soul
Growing old and bone thin
Restless winds rustle within
I said I love him
But does he love me?
When I'm bad
I'm real bad
And when I'm good
No one will hurt you
Because I said I love him
Though he doesn't believe me
He says he loves me
Until yesteryear comes
Shines a grimy smile
In my stead
Claws my reflection
When I look in the mirror
I look in me
And I see him
I said I love him
But does he love me?
I can't seem to free him
From the enemy

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mirage29
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posted May 12, 2017 07:13 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
You aptly captured the 'restrains restraints' of relationship dynamics.

That's certainly how it can feel.
Great job, MetalAphrodite.

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Randall
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posted May 14, 2017 02:28 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Clever word play.

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Pearlty
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posted May 15, 2017 09:48 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

Brilliant read

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Ayelet
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posted May 22, 2017 10:39 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Haunting words. It seems like he is capturing you in the mirror, clawing your reflection with the question of unrequited love.

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Randall
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posted May 23, 2017 03:50 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I like how you described it, Ayelet.

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mirage29
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posted June 02, 2017 09:50 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
MetalAphrodite... You're a GEMINI, aren't you?

What day?

(Add your Special Day to the YW Calendar thread so we can remind ourselves?)
http://www.linda-goodman.com/ubb/Forum17/HTML/003027.html

So far...

We have 2 Gemini, 2 Cancer, 2 Scorpio, and 1 Goat ... LOL

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Randall
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posted June 03, 2017 09:36 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
*grunt*

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