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Topic: refrain reframe
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MetalAphrodite Moderator Posts: 2493 From: Zanguin :3 Registered: Jul 2012
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posted May 12, 2017 03:42 PM
"refrain reframe"I said I love him But does he love me? The glass in my heels Dig at my soul Growing old and bone thin Restless winds rustle within I said I love him But does he love me? When I'm bad I'm real bad And when I'm good No one will hurt you Because I said I love him Though he doesn't believe me He says he loves me Until yesteryear comes Shines a grimy smile In my stead Claws my reflection When I look in the mirror I look in me And I see him I said I love him But does he love me? I can't seem to free him From the enemy IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 7688 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted May 12, 2017 07:13 PM
You aptly captured the 'restrains restraints' of relationship dynamics.That's certainly how it can feel. Great job, MetalAphrodite. IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 80346 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted May 14, 2017 02:28 PM
Clever word play.IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1656 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted May 15, 2017 09:48 AM
Brilliant read IP: Logged |
Ayelet Moderator Posts: 2462 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted May 22, 2017 10:39 PM
Haunting words. It seems like he is capturing you in the mirror, clawing your reflection with the question of unrequited love.IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 80346 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted May 23, 2017 03:50 PM
I like how you described it, Ayelet.IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 7688 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted June 02, 2017 09:50 PM
MetalAphrodite... You're a GEMINI, aren't you? What day? (Add your Special Day to the YW Calendar thread so we can remind ourselves?) http://www.linda-goodman.com/ubb/Forum17/HTML/003027.html So far... We have 2 Gemini, 2 Cancer, 2 Scorpio, and 1 Goat ... LOL IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 80346 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted June 03, 2017 09:36 AM
*grunt*IP: Logged |