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Topic: "Slippery"
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Virgo-AriesArtist
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From: MidWest :)
Registered: Jun 2009
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posted December 07, 2018 10:53 PM
  
This is a poem I have shared no where else...mainly because my marriage is in the process of ending, and I cannot afford to let anyone know the contents of my thoughts. This is about someone I know in a work capacity.
***Every time I evict you from my brain,
You swing back in twice as hard
This boomerang of interaction
Its influence cannot be marred Why do you return to my thoughts,
When you seem like a fish who cannot be caught
And it makes me think of you more often than I ought Silly fish
With eyes so warm
You confuse me so?
Yet you mean me no harm
I cannot overthink this
I must take it day by day
As you swim in and out of my path
And I wait to see if you'll stay ------------------
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Ayelet
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posted December 08, 2018 03:31 PM
Lovely.IP: Logged |
Pearlty
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From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012
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posted December 09, 2018 11:25 AM
Beautifully written thoughts.. IP: Logged |
ballerina
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From: A Place on Earth
Registered: Feb 2014
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posted December 09, 2018 01:06 PM
I love it!There are so many
talented people here! ------------------
All my love, with all my Heart
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mirage29
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From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted December 09, 2018 08:15 PM
omg.. I'm so sorry your marriage is slipping away.   Saw this, AFTER I responded to your "Dear Fish" poem-posting. ref - http://www.linda-goodman.com/ubb/Forum17/HTML/003466.html IP: Logged |
Virgo-AriesArtist
Knowflake Posts: 1003
From: MidWest :)
Registered: Jun 2009
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posted December 09, 2018 09:50 PM
Mirage,
Thank you for the compliments.My marriage, well, it has been too damn complicated for too long, so don't be sorry. I have only started to reawaken since I decided to end it, and then the Fish caught my eye. I feel so uncertain as to whether I am reading into his communication, but he seems a kindred soul for sure. ------------------
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thequeen
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posted December 16, 2018 01:27 PM
Wow...Right now I have a soulmate(Fish) in my life whom I just cant shove off...Can relate completely..beautiful..IP: Logged |
mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 11142
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Registered: May 2012
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posted December 16, 2018 05:09 PM
 Season's Greetings  IP: Logged |
Randall
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From: From a galaxy, far, far away...
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted December 16, 2018 07:44 PM
Loves it.IP: Logged |
Virgo-AriesArtist
Knowflake Posts: 1003
From: MidWest :)
Registered: Jun 2009
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posted December 16, 2018 10:50 PM
Thequeen,
So, any insight into Pisces men? They confuse me so...but I don't want to waste energy on daysreams either.IP: Logged |
thequeen
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posted December 23, 2018 09:49 AM
Pisces men can definitely lure you in. They are very sensitive and have a deep soul but that doesnt mean they are perfect. Even a Pisces can be arrogant...IP: Logged |
LF DX
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From: Paraguay
Registered: Sep 2014
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posted January 01, 2019 09:21 PM
That final part, the way it's versed, can be done to a song, it's pretty good!!IP: Logged |
Virgo-AriesArtist
Knowflake Posts: 1003
From: MidWest :)
Registered: Jun 2009
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posted March 01, 2019 11:21 PM
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Originally posted by LF DX:
That final part, the way it's versed, can be done to a song, it's pretty good!!
Thank you, LF DX! I'm still feeling this energy from the Fish 3 months later, LOL. IP: Logged |
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