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Topic: September Moon Escapade
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LF DX Knowflake Posts: 432 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted August 02, 2017 09:34 PM
September moon is on the sky The spring is coming by And I forget that the world is a mess While I sleep on your knees The place smells like agony But the flowers, they still grow The serenity of our love Can make the darkness to goThere’s no paradise, in this city The red fever, swept it away I don’t mind to feel the rain This time I will sustain The wind howls with sorrow But for us it’s a gentle breeze Your love is like a relic That turns sadness into peace May war breed in the streets May hunger eat us alive Maybe we won’t ever have freedom Maybe death will greet us today September moon is on the sky The spring is coming by And I forget that the world is a mess While I sleep on your knees Human bonds are few now In this reality But our love it’s a reminder That hope’s still roams free IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1714 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted August 03, 2017 08:52 AM
Beautiful, I especially like your ending linesIP: Logged |
Ayelet Moderator Posts: 2542 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted August 03, 2017 08:58 PM
It captures great hope amid sadness.IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 83661 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted August 04, 2017 08:52 PM
quote: Originally posted by Ayelet: It captures great hope amid sadness.
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Randall Webmaster Posts: 83661 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted August 05, 2017 09:31 AM
quote: Originally posted by Pearlty: Beautiful, I especially like your ending lines
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mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 8183 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted August 14, 2017 03:29 PM
Like crushed and bruised roses and petals. Releases its scent.IP: Logged |