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MysticMelody Knowflake Posts: 1066 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 27, 2007 01:25 AM
Hello my poetic friends Welcome to existence without endThe lessons we learn The lessons we teach All perfectly timed Always within reach Hello to you! And you! And you! Welcome to our work of art The experience we create In joining Our minds Our hearts First a little Anglo/Sax Rough Tough Abrupt Then relax And go with the flowing Delicate, passionate, embrace Of other styles and Other times And other beats And other rhymes What’s next for us On our journey Our quest? Let’s help each other do our best. ------------------ "Did you ever get the chance to dance along the light of day?" IP: Logged |
MysticMelody Knowflake Posts: 1066 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 27, 2007 01:27 AM
Anglo Saxon Riddle 1You look at me ------- My light inside You touch me now ------ Finger tips stroke I don’t see you ------- I distort your sight I am hard and firm ---- I am heavy and stable I keep your secrets --- I share your stories I keep you company ---- In the cold night A task-master --------- And teacher by day Guess my name (your computer)
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MysticMelody Knowflake Posts: 1066 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 27, 2007 01:29 AM
Anglo-Saxon Riddle 2I inspire and soar----- Sadden and gladden We are friends -------- You dance freely At times you cry ------ At times you scream You worship and honor ---My wisdom and advice A piece of you ------- Your personality You create me ------- I create you Guess my name (your music) IP: Logged |
MysticMelody Knowflake Posts: 1066 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 27, 2007 01:34 AM
License and Insurance Please (inspired by a true event on "Cops")License and insurance please. Nothin’! It’s ice-tea! Gonna ask you to step out. (Ask him what it’s for!!) Plate light is out. (Can he tell?!?) (Maybe if I start to yell) All this because the plate light is out!?!? (Please oh please Don’t let them find out) Have to ask you to put that cigarette out. (I really need to smoke) (So stressed out) Uhh, just got off work Just going home No, it’s JUST ICE-TEA Are you handcuffing me!? NO! You DON’T Have permission To search my car (I know my rights) Fine, Call it in. Oh, we have to wait… ok Hey, will you grab my smokes? Do I have your permission to open the pack. I have to check it for weapons. Yeah, yeah Gimmie one Bob, I’m gonna need you to come over here. Found a crack stem in there. Now we’re gonna search the car. Twenty rocks of crack cocaine. Why do you have all this. I was going away for the weekend Yeah, but Why do you have all this. I was gonna be gone for two days!!! How many rocks do you smoke in a day. About 10 (I need one right now) 10? I think you need help with your addiction, man.
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MysticMelody Knowflake Posts: 1066 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 27, 2007 01:40 AM
A Sunny DayA nice ride, through the streets A sunny day, and I was happy I like to ride With my Mom. If I had to go to the dentist If I was sick We would take a drive together Just like this Just the two of us I looked out the window We were together ---you were tearing out your i.v.’s ---you kept taking off all of your clothes ---you were fighting and screaming ---i waited with you all night and in the ---morning ---they told me to go home ---to get some sleep Am I…? Where AM I??? Is this the Doctor?!? I CAN’T MOVE!!!!!! I’M STRAPPED DOWN!!!!! I CAN’T think... What nightmare is this!? HELP!!! WHAT’S GOING ON??? ~~~Just calm down~~~ Who ARE you people?! Where AM I? Why am I TIED DOWN!?? ###She’s getting combatitive again###
What are you putting in there!?? What are you putting in me!?? I want my Mother! (where’s my mommy) Oh God, Have they taken MY baby?!! WHERE IS SHE?!? What have they done?!? Do I have to fight for my Rosie!?!
~~~Your mother went home for a little bit~~~ ~~~We are getting a helicopter ready~~~ ~~~You are going to be air-lifted to Peoria hospital~~~ ~~~Your mom will meet you there.~~~ With my baby?!? ~~~Yes, I think so~~~ ~~~Just relax~~~ well…
I am
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MysticMelody Knowflake Posts: 1066 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 27, 2007 01:45 AM
Innocence I don’t know If it’s right
To share the dark And the light Innocence Purity Why, oh God Does she look To me With those eyes That are wise And would catch Deceptive Lies IP: Logged |
MysticMelody Knowflake Posts: 1066 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 27, 2007 01:47 AM
Meant to BeDrowning in chick flick emotion what was what is what might have been my child my heart my bad decision A circular struggle staged for my dark enjoyment I wouldn’t change a thing, my daughter is perfect the one who is meant to be my child A choice made long ago Before these roles A decision Predestined My mind will toy with what is what was my choice in a husband My mind will toy with What is predestined?
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MysticMelody Knowflake Posts: 1066 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 27, 2007 01:49 AM
ExtortionIf there’s one thing That I just hate It’s returning movies So they aren’t late Or worse yet If I forget the date And have to pay Each day they wait For me to realize My cumbersome fate, Sighing at my slippers And wishing I had a mate IP: Logged |
MysticMelody Knowflake Posts: 1066 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 27, 2007 01:51 AM
FearFear wears a costume A child on a chilly fall evening Pretends to be A powerful magician A superhero Or a villain He doesn’t need you To hold his hand But his world is ominous He jumps at every shadow Starts at the natural sound of a dog barking or a car starting He would run Into the road To escape So, love holds his hand IP: Logged |
MysticMelody Knowflake Posts: 1066 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 27, 2007 01:52 AM
TEENAGERS Trying to find them selves Everyone watching them Everyone judging them No one understands Anger rises and begins to focus Grinning on the outside Embarrassment, rage, and plans for REVENGE Spray out as machine gun fire
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MysticMelody Knowflake Posts: 1066 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 27, 2007 01:53 AM
Green I remember his blonde hair it was a little spiky on top and we used to joke that he took longer than
a girl to get ready when we all dressed up to go dancing and smiling and flirting and laughing smelling like perfume or Polo and Drakkar Noir I remember he was quiet The other boys were loud and he was quiet and gentle and he followed them We would go to the cemetery and Jon would run and scale the walls and stone like a streak of red and Brad and Dan would creep off alone and jump out to scare us to death smiling yellow smiles And Tim would puff up a loyal and heroic blue and tell them to take it easy on the girls and Dominick or Mark would give us a hot, fun wink and Russell would sit still and alone and quiet on a lone wall by a mausoleum or walk quietly toward the trees, looking up at the stars and his very stillness would stop the youthful frenzied activity of one of us, who would calmly walk to his side, drawn to the peaceful green of his being. When they hung out at Jon’s house they were all redder wilder more experimental even Russell who followed I remember the afternoon they told me he was dead that Jon held him in his arms probably waiting too long to call the ambulance the only time he was slow to do anything that he held his head his blonde spiky hair and looked into his eyes while he convulsed and died I remember we went to the funeral without knowing or acknowledging his family as if he was our family immaturely unaware in our own grief Russell lay in the coffin still alone and quiet a sacrifice on the altar of youth We all went to the cemetery our cars creeping along the winding drives that scaled the hills and ran along the walls between the stones and when we arrived at the burial Jon boldly led us around the stones while Brad joked nervously to relieve the tension and Tim hovered over the girls we walked quietly toward the trees and stood surrounded by green and as Russell’s family moved away from the coffin our family advanced calmly drawn to the stillness stopping our frenzied youthful activity long enough to say goodbye We tossed memories and irreverent tokens into the grave to our friend slips of paper with words of love lighters because he always somehow ended up with ours condoms because that was all they had left in their pockets to give “Good luck up there,” friend! We traveled home Well, to Jon’s lost in the unknown depths of our tender emotions and confused by the barrage of thoughts and insights that had invaded our minds We sprayed each other with the garden hose laughing until we cried so glad to be alive dancing in rainbows under the cool blue sky and the red, yellow, and orange sun as we trampled the green grass beneath our feet without noticing. IP: Logged |
MysticMelody Knowflake Posts: 1066 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 27, 2007 01:55 AM
Princess Rosie’s Dollhouse The window panes are clear and tall, tidy wooden boxes bloom with flowers below Mom and Dad with brother and Rosie sit together, rocking the baby slow
Aroma of cookies wafts through the air, gingham picnic basket on the patio family strolls out, the wind in their hair Idyllic setting, perfection in faux Dollhouse world where Daddy is kind, a man who protects and provides for Princess Rose instead of a violent , dead-beat dad supervised visit, with someone unknown Mommy fighting to protect little girl within a Norman Rockwell nightmare world
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MysticMelody Knowflake Posts: 1066 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted May 07, 2007 12:21 AM
-Girls Gone Wild- Girl Gone Wild or just a child with twisted inspiration Feminine power Feminine mystique from the pages of Cosmopolitan A literary rag unnaturally birthed from the bulging womb of masculine agenda children manipulated into becoming cold, unfeeling Corporate slaves and prostitutes Over-used and Underpaid IP: Logged |
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posted May 07, 2007 09:56 AM
I like the diversity and the way you express yourself here! It has a beatnik or Keroac-ish (Kerouac) flavor to it all. ------------------ ~Judgement Must Be Balanced With Compassion~ ~Do Not Seek Wealth From The Suffering, Or The Dire Needs Of Others~ ~Assumption Is The Bane Of Understanding~ }><}}}(*> <*){{{><{ ~~~ ~~ ~~~~ ~~~ ~~ ~~~~~ ~~~ ~~~~ ~~~ IP: Logged |
MysticMelody Knowflake Posts: 1066 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted May 07, 2007 03:01 PM
Thanks Fayte, I had to look up Keroac. Interesting and a compliment for sure "It is because I am Beat, that is, I believe in beatitude and that God so loved the world that he gave his only begotten son to it... Who knows, but that the universe is not one vast sea of compassion actually, the veritable holy honey, beneath all this show of personality and cruelty?" ~Kerouac
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posted May 07, 2007 03:38 PM
YES! Definitely take it as a Big compliment!Folks got the idea that Beatnik meant bums, or criminals. Far far from that! It was in many ways much like the Bohemian/Spiritual & Literary movement of the late 19th. and early 20th. centuries. From Wikipedia: quote: The beat philosophy was generally counter-cultural, anti-materialistic and stressed the importance of bettering one's inner self over and above material possessions. Some beat writers began to delve into Eastern religions such as Buddhism or Taoism. Politics tended to be liberal; with support for causes such as desegregation. An openness to African-American culture and arts was apparent in literature and music, notably jazz. While Caen and other writers implied a connection with communism, there was no direct connection between the beat philosophy (as expressed by the leading authors of this literary movement) and the philosophy of the communist movement, other than the antipathy that both philosophies shared towards capitalism. This connection is questionable because of the distinctly spiritual element of the beat philosophy, as contrasted with the anti-spiritual views in Marxist philosophy.
More: http://www.digihitch.com/article22.html quote: The Culture of Movement (Perspective) Submitted Sun, Apr 15, 2001 by MorganBeing on the road is a multi-dimensional thing. The willingness to just hit it and see what happens is a way of living and traveling that not everyone can dig. (--you dig?) The bohemian represents a culture of movement and art that has its origins in the early ages of Eastern Europe, but has taken on a new meaning in this last century.... With the convergence of artists, musicians and writers in late 19th century Paris, the term was brought out of the annals of history and reapplied. Hence, the modern day bohemian was born. Later, the lost generation of the 1920s woke the bohemian spirit in Paris, New York and elsewhere-- through writing, art and contemporary thought. Later still, when the beat generation of the 50's was emerging, the title was again bestowed. 'Bohemian' became a word synonymous with restless, creative angst.
We all have a stereotype image of a bohemian. For some, it's a vision of an inspired Ewan McGregor in Moulin Rouge, clacking out florid prose on a typewriter and singing love songs... or the picture of a beat poet, smoking a cigarette or joint while listening to jazz music and snapping his fingers, mumbling existential poetry with half-lidded, bloodshot eyes and a whiskered goatee. This is not what bohemian culture is all about, though, and we know it. Like a snapshot, we only get part of the picture if we weren't there to live the moment first hand. The culture is a shared understanding of ideals- an attitude and vibe that we experience, not wear for a night out like a costume. It's a movement, but not a bandwagon. Being on the road is a heady thing. While a poet captures part of the mood, he isn't the icon itself. He represents the intellectual and emotional aspects of linear movement- from here to there and points between. There is philosophy of both mind and heart in his words and voice. Through this we are taught to map the routes of our physical longings and explore the distance between urge and action. The poet is drawn to remark on the way we got here and where he believes we're heading. The inspiration that rolls off his pages does not by itself motivate us to action. That role is reserved for others. The poet/philosopher is just one of many drivers, not the vehicle itself. Being on the road is a soulful thing. It's being pulled to some rhythm that is both in and outside us at the same time. A highway is just a surface until we begin to feel inside its length and divergencies. Once we click with what it grips in us about our own path we're able to inflict others with the gut-wrenching reality of going, getting there, becoming lost and found. The jazz musician represents this sense of soul. Through his music, he takes us on a journey, causing us to catch a ride on a brass buzz that flings us out one step ahead of ourselves- like madness. It's heady, yeah, but visceral; the taste of metal, nearly indigestable. Clunking around in our stomachs, it reminds us of itself over and over again. The musician, too, is just a piece of it, though. He gives the search color and substance but can't take us all the way there. Being on the road is a spiritual thing; a quest for temporary detachment for the sake of enlightened connection. We know we don't grasp it all, feel we can't digest its course, and so the bottom falls out long enough for us to float between the two. A starting point and end destination merge into each other, and we envision their only true difference to rest in what we make of the present middle. The prophet represents this spiritual wandering. With sack-cloth robe, scudded feet and eyes ablaze, he lives outside of reason or physical urge, hollering with holy zeal at the masses. He scares us because he has traveled through places we've only dreamed of; communed with a terrible purpose; become burned by the hand of an Ultimate Power. He shakes and swims inside fervor, but when he confronts us with voice and eyes we are struck with the absolute steadiness of his motivation. Get ready and go, he says. Forget escape. Get up and move. Seek the answers along the way. The prophet reignites our vision but he does not take us down the road. We flail between philosophic, musical, and prophetic epiphanies on our own and in the company of others. We see and forget, feel and go numb, burn and dampen. The cycle repeats, fueling us further; enlightening others. Adrenaline. The bohemian becomes one who is drawn and torn among three: the poet, the musician, the prophet. We create them in ourselves and amongst those who feed us along the way. They create the culture of our continual movement.
More interesting reads here: http://www.digihitch.com/
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posted May 07, 2007 03:46 PM
http://www.digihitch.com/road-culture/beat-generation/2 ------------------ ~Judgement Must Be Balanced With Compassion~ ~Do Not Seek Wealth From The Suffering, Or The Dire Needs Of Others~ ~Assumption Is The Bane Of Understanding~ }><}}}(*> <*){{{><{ ~~~ ~~ ~~~~ ~~~ ~~ ~~~~~ ~~~ ~~~~ ~~~ IP: Logged |
MysticMelody Knowflake Posts: 1066 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted May 09, 2007 12:04 AM
I have now read everything you pasted. It was awesome. I will check the links some day soon... and maybe will have more poems to post too. I might start posting some old ones if the mood is right. IP: Logged |
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posted May 09, 2007 12:57 AM
Cool! I want to see more! But yeah.... Wait for the mood, the pulse, the rhythm, the soul, and the Beat to feel right! ------------------ ~Judgement Must Be Balanced With Compassion~ ~Do Not Seek Wealth From The Suffering, Or The Dire Needs Of Others~ ~Assumption Is The Bane Of Understanding~ }><}}}(*> <*){{{><{ ~~~ ~~ ~~~~ ~~~ ~~ ~~~~~ ~~~ ~~~~ ~~~IP: Logged |
MysticMelody Knowflake Posts: 1066 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 07, 2008 01:14 PM
lyrics. written in the a.m. days ago so it's partly crap. and I like parts. the song is dull and lifeless but the chorus melody is a touch sassy mixed with the dull And it passed the time away it passed the road to stay it passed my life a la ehhhh
I don’t even care if you do it now I don’t evennnncare how you say I don’t even care if you do it now it’s the same ol same ol day numb to feeling nothing numb to time and (to?)space numb with all this nothing numb wthin this space you don’t even hear it coming! you don’t even know I see you think you can’t or have or something but really you just sit like me the walls are here around me walls of time and mind and pain walls are standing all around me bound to what I make them be it’s all here now (it’s near me) it’s here now (around me) it’s here now (among me)(eeeeee) it’s here can’t you see you don’t even hear it coming! you don’t even know I see you think you can’t or have or something but really you just sit like me you don’t even hear it coming! you don’t even know I see you think you can’t or have or something but really you just sit like me really you just sit like me IP: Logged |
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posted April 07, 2008 05:59 PM
I like them, Mystic Melody~ IP: Logged |
MysticMelody Knowflake Posts: 1066 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 07, 2008 06:44 PM
Thank you for taking your time to read them, Silverstone. And thanks for the kind comment! I'm trying to fix that last one a bit. I kind of dislike it more every time I look at it. I was pretty exhausted when I wrote it. But I do love the others. I'm really glad you like them too. IP: Logged |
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posted April 08, 2008 11:55 PM
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Quinnie Knowflake Posts: 1206 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted May 03, 2008 05:41 PM
Hi Mystic Melody! I love your poetry. Do I remember correctly in one thread that Randall said you were getting your poetry published?IP: Logged |
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posted May 03, 2008 11:36 PM
Impressive work. Thanks for letting us take a peek inside. IP: Logged |