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Topic: Temporary
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Ayelet
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posted February 21, 2018 08:07 PM
  
TemporaryIt was daylight. I was crying. I was suffocating in fear.
The woman from upstairs accidentally told me "Good night" in midday. Is it a coincidence?
And when I got out of prison, they sang on tv that my time has passed.
But I still retained my love for cookies.
So my desperation lasted for one minute. And so, it seemed, my life.
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Randall
Webmaster Posts: 97647
From: From a galaxy, far, far away...
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posted February 22, 2018 10:40 AM
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mirage29
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Registered: May 2012
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posted February 23, 2018 04:33 PM
Being wished Good-night during the mid-day?I think of the Land of The Midnight Sun, where the Sun never goes completely down-- so if you need to go to bed?, you say goodnight. The Sun. It rebounds.
Only Shine  ... and eat cookies!  Temporary.... LOVE it.
Your poems grow on me the more I think of them. You write 'complexly', my dear ..  *~ .. "Put On The FULL Protective Armor of Light"   May no Words heard as a Misspeak harm a single precious hair on your head. * Quell and Dispel the thoughts ...
Wax .. like water rolls off a duck's feathers
Guarded and Preserved .. like the gorgeous Protective skin-coat that protects the Lotus Flower Leaving only Gentle Fragrant Peace ... IP: Logged |
Randall
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posted February 24, 2018 09:35 AM
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Pearlty
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Registered: Jan 2012
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posted March 07, 2018 09:09 PM
Love this type of writing Ayelet. In the moment feelings yet after reading over a few times provokes deeper meaning. IP: Logged |
Ayelet
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posted March 12, 2018 09:01 PM
Thank you all Mirage, nice info about the midnight sun blessing. It could have been nice to watch. Used to have this longing. And thank you for blessing me. You are very kind I appreciate it so much.. IP: Logged |
thequeen
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posted March 23, 2018 06:57 PM
If it is a recent written poem of yours, i am not the best kind of judge to say, but since I only recently became a little more active on the forum, I can see your writing has gained more meaning and depth to it. Love it. Had to read it two-three times to interpret it. But still I want to get in your head and explore those meaningful neurons that give you the depth IP: Logged |
anonymidarkness
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posted May 12, 2018 10:03 PM
Whenever my meditation is going wrong, I read your poems...they get me back in tune again, they put a smile on my face every time I take a dip in them, for a moment I'm there IP: Logged |
Ayelet
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posted May 13, 2018 01:27 AM
Anonymidarkness, that is probably the greatest compliment I ever got. Thequeen, thank you, I saw your post just now. IP: Logged |
Randall
Webmaster Posts: 97647
From: From a galaxy, far, far away...
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posted May 14, 2018 05:41 PM
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Originally posted by anonymidarkness:
Whenever my meditation is going wrong, I read your poems...they get me back in tune again, they put a smile on my face every time I take a dip in them, for a moment I'm there
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Randall
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posted May 15, 2018 07:29 AM
Well-said, thequeen.IP: Logged |
mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 9998
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Registered: May 2012
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posted May 15, 2018 08:33 AM
Ayelet ..... Please stay safe out there.
Let us know if you're okay.
Every time I see the news about violence breaking out with Israel, I feel concern for you. IP: Logged |
Ayelet
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posted May 15, 2018 02:36 PM
Hi Mirage, thank you very much for your concern. I am fine. Things are at peace where I am. IP: Logged |
Randall
Webmaster Posts: 97647
From: From a galaxy, far, far away...
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posted May 23, 2018 04:11 PM
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Originally posted by Ayelet:
Hi Mirage, thank you very much for your concern. I am fine. Things are at peace where I am.
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mirage29
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posted May 23, 2018 07:00 PM
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Randall
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posted July 03, 2018 11:35 AM
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