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Topic: Come and Shine
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Ayelet Moderator Posts: 2764 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted April 05, 2018 01:39 PM
Come and ShineWhen mother asked where, She was as pure as snow, and delicate and warm as the Easter bunny. "I am not made of chocolate," she said, "but you couldn't tell the difference." And as she walked wherever, she shed her peels, her nourishing peels, and remained a naked portrait, one step away from being real. "It is the passing of the seasons, all these non senses," she said and fainted in my bed. Now I look to the sky to see her at night. Her glamour will never disappoint, She is as devastating as Spring, and naturally so, though if it wasn't for her fainting, I probably wouldn't have noticed. IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 98919 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 06, 2018 01:48 PM
Childlike wonder!IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 98919 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 07, 2018 07:28 PM
With a hint of sadness. Brilliant.IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 10099 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted April 07, 2018 08:25 PM
I want to say that this poem overall is very 'sweet' ? AND, as I know you are a deep person, like Randall was saying... a hint of bitter-sweetness haunts so very lightly.
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Ayelet Moderator Posts: 2764 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted April 08, 2018 09:43 PM
Thank you guy and lady IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 98919 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 09, 2018 11:30 AM
I love it.IP: Logged |
Pearlty Knowflake Posts: 1830 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted April 12, 2018 08:37 PM
Lighthearted feel to this, yet positively intricate IP: Logged |
Ayelet Moderator Posts: 2764 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted April 16, 2018 02:40 AM
Thanks Pearly IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 98919 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted May 24, 2018 07:26 AM
Bump!IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 98919 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted August 01, 2018 07:20 PM
quote: Originally posted by Pearlty:
Lighthearted feel to this, yet positively intricate
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