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Topic: "Lifeback"
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Virgo-AriesArtist Knowflake Posts: 1131 From: MidWest :) Registered: Jun 2009
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posted November 09, 2019 12:22 AM
That day in the autumn I’ll always remember It was the first step I took to being untetheredWhen I reconsidered the toll it was taking I was forced to reevaluate the choice I was making There was nothing simple about that first step And in spite of the fear the tears had been long ago wept Each day passing since I’ve reclaimed a piece of my truth No more will I sacrifice for another’s feeling to soothe I’ve learned how my heart beats seen my eye regain their sparkle Nothing could be more precious Than the peace I’ve found in this struggle The knowledge I’ve gained and the skin that I’ve shed The Zen that pervades as I sleep in my bed So now you may wonder, was this truth worth the cost? All I can say is, I‘m no longer lost. ------------------ Check out my poetry! <3 https://www.facebook.com/KKaneskyPoet IP: Logged |
Ayelet Moderator Posts: 3162 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted November 09, 2019 01:05 AM
Very well written. You claimed your freedom and remained true to yourself, thus you are found. IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 118827 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted November 09, 2019 10:41 AM
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Virgo-AriesArtist Knowflake Posts: 1131 From: MidWest :) Registered: Jun 2009
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posted November 10, 2019 07:51 AM
quote: Originally posted by Ayelet: Very well written. You claimed your freedom and remained true to yourself, thus you are found.
Thank you, Ayelet ------------------ Check out my poetry! <3 https://www.facebook.com/KKaneskyPoet IP: Logged |
ballerina Moderator Posts: 2045 From: A Place on Earth Registered: Feb 2014
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posted November 12, 2019 09:19 AM
Virgo-AriesArtist No longer lost! I love it! Inspiration! ------------------ All my love, with all my Heart lotusheartone/Emeraldopal IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 118827 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted November 12, 2019 05:40 PM
Love the last four lines.IP: Logged |
Virgo-AriesArtist Knowflake Posts: 1131 From: MidWest :) Registered: Jun 2009
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posted November 12, 2019 10:17 PM
quote: Originally posted by ballerina: Virgo-AriesArtist No longer lost! I love it! Inspiration!
Thank you, lotusheartone
Someday, I will find love again...one can only hope ------------------ Check out my poetry! <3 https://www.facebook.com/KKaneskyPoet IP: Logged |
Virgo-AriesArtist Knowflake Posts: 1131 From: MidWest :) Registered: Jun 2009
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posted November 12, 2019 10:18 PM
quote: Originally posted by Randall: Love the last four lines.
Thank you, Randall ------------------ Check out my poetry! <3 https://www.facebook.com/KKaneskyPoet IP: Logged |