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Topic: Solace
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thequeen Moderator Posts: 4422 From: Registered: Sep 2014
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posted March 23, 2018 07:54 PM
Let it be, Let me walk in circles, And, Forget about the visions, Of you and me, Moving in solace, To hold your hand And, Pull you from eternities, Just to look at you, And never touch, Never feel, And, Just know that you are, There, Thinking of me.IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 93740 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 24, 2018 01:21 PM
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mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 9484 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted March 24, 2018 11:34 PM
Old memories, or true flame? ... mmmm, warm, nonetheless. Is this some kind of anniversary of loss for you? If it is, I offer you comfort-- solace. IP: Logged |
thequeen Moderator Posts: 4422 From: Registered: Sep 2014
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posted March 25, 2018 12:59 PM
Thank you Randall..No mirage I this is not any sort of anniversary, but I am just trying to start writing poems again.. Just getting in the flow. Thanks for your comment though.. IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 9484 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted March 25, 2018 05:22 PM
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Randall Webmaster Posts: 93740 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 26, 2018 11:36 AM
You're off to a great start!IP: Logged |
Ayelet Moderator Posts: 2697 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted March 26, 2018 07:23 PM
Hi thequeen! Sometimes you can take a break from something you do (writing), and then, when you come back to it you discover you developed a new layer, or fresh energies and change come to play.I wondered how you don't want to feel, but want to know he is there, thinking of you. I think I got the feeling of not to touch, as something in a different realm, unapproachable, but I wonder whether your feelings are unapproachable as well, and if so, what does it mean for you to have solace without feeling. IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 93740 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 28, 2018 09:23 AM
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Randall Webmaster Posts: 93740 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 29, 2018 01:57 PM
quote: Originally posted by Ayelet: Hi thequeen! Sometimes you can take a break from something you do (writing), and then, when you come back to it you discover you developed a new layer, or fresh energies and change come to play.I wondered how you don't want to feel, but want to know he is there, thinking of you. I think I got the feeling of not to touch, as something in a different realm, unapproachable, but I wonder whether your feelings are unapproachable as well, and if so, what does it mean for you to have solace without feeling.
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Pearlty Knowflake Posts: 1806 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted March 29, 2018 10:28 PM
Magical.. thequeen
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Randall Webmaster Posts: 93740 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 30, 2018 12:32 PM
Great title. IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 93740 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 31, 2018 07:02 PM
quote: Originally posted by Pearlty: Magical.. thequeen
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