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Topic: Legend
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Ayelet Moderator Posts: 2786 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted April 26, 2018 05:03 AM
LegendCould it be I'm writing for the future? For the day we'll all come back to life? Is it true we're all the sleeping beauty, Waiting for her prince to come at last? And in that kiss lies our imagination, as pure as sand and omnious as sea, and he will cross the long ways of the desert and travel as a man of deep surrender. I see the prince already, do you see him not? It's in the game, emotion follows thought, as I am following thee in our play and catch the wind and all it has to say. IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 10362 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted April 26, 2018 10:46 PM
Beautiful! IP: Logged |
Pearlty Knowflake Posts: 1840 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted April 28, 2018 10:49 AM
Love this ayelet, such good and imaginative workIP: Logged |
Ayelet Moderator Posts: 2786 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted April 28, 2018 02:06 PM
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Randall Webmaster Posts: 101771 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 28, 2018 02:18 PM
Beautiful.IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 10362 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted May 05, 2018 11:21 PM
When I read your poem today, I could imagine a 'chase' and interchange-- between death and life. (music) She's Like The Wind (Patrick Swayze, lyrics) [3:47] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oiiix_vIBSw Your work ... so mysterious.
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Randall Webmaster Posts: 101771 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted May 06, 2018 11:43 AM
quote: Originally posted by mirage29: When I read your poem today, I could imagine a 'chase' and interchange-- between death and life. (music) She's Like The Wind (Patrick Swayze, lyrics) [3:47] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oiiix_vIBSw Your work ... so mysterious.
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Ayelet Moderator Posts: 2786 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted May 07, 2018 02:51 PM
quote: Originally posted by mirage29: When I read your poem today, I could imagine a 'chase' and interchange-- between death and life. (music) She's Like The Wind (Patrick Swayze, lyrics) [3:47] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oiiix_vIBSw Your work ... so mysterious.
It's a beautiful song, so sad though... I can relate. IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 101771 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted August 15, 2018 03:58 PM
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Randall Webmaster Posts: 101771 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted October 05, 2018 07:27 PM
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