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Topic: Indifference and lies
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LF DX Knowflake Posts: 566 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted October 25, 2017 09:49 PM
I’m out of ways to be waiting I’m out of time to be hoping That you would come out and see me You lie so miserablyI’m disturbed by your indifference Can you see it doesn’t make any sense? The way you flip-flop your words Is an insult to my soul And your secondhanded praise Doesn’t have any kind of grace Life ain’t just a romantic prose It swings and jives, it comes and goes Sometimes sorrow ruins the day Sometimes liars ruin the day Why you leave me hanging? Why you’re still lying? What’s with the game you play? Why it has to be this way? I’m disturbed by your indifference Can you see it doesn’t make any sense? The way you flip-flop your words Is an insult to my soul This wrecked noise Is the anger in my voice Why it has to be me Why it has to be me Why I have to be paying Your sins of love
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Randall Webmaster Posts: 97106 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted October 26, 2017 10:29 AM
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Pearlty Knowflake Posts: 1819 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted October 28, 2017 02:43 PM
"Why I have to be paying Your sins of love" Powerful ending lines Lots of stark emotion entailed throughout your whole piece here.
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mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 9910 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted October 28, 2017 11:41 PM
^ agree (music) Why'd You Lie (Colin James) [3:58] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SdSEJ0OjONc How was Brazil? IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 97106 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted February 27, 2018 10:49 AM
Bump!IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 97106 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted February 28, 2018 10:16 AM
How was Brazil???IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 97106 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 01, 2018 10:48 AM
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mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 9910 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted March 01, 2018 05:33 PM
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aha!!!! {sneaking up on you}
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Randall Webmaster Posts: 97106 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 02, 2018 07:31 PM
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LF DX Knowflake Posts: 566 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted March 03, 2018 10:50 AM
Well, the scorpio woman and me are still friends, I'm still kinda attracted to her, but I moved on. I think somewhere soon it will happen again, but next time I'll be more ready for it.IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 97106 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 15, 2018 03:23 PM
Any updates to share?IP: Logged |
Ayelet Moderator Posts: 2738 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted April 16, 2018 02:48 AM
Have you talked things through? It seems like you have so much to tell her. Even though I understand you're kind of separated now. But just letting the other know what you truly felt. I agree with Pearly. Can't say it better. IP: Logged |
LF DX Knowflake Posts: 566 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted April 20, 2018 01:28 AM
Nope, didn't talk, it's a shame really, but I couldn't again be brave with it and make a step forward, but it is what it is now and I moved on... Yet I think the reason of my creative block is not being able to evolve in my personal life, yet my band is starting to be known in the city, so there is that. Yet I'm now just running through the motions, without a clear path, just me and the music.IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 97106 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 21, 2018 01:20 PM
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Randall Webmaster Posts: 97106 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted June 22, 2018 03:25 PM
I feel you.IP: Logged |