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Topic: Nature's Fury
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thequeen
Moderator Posts: 5089
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Registered: Sep 2014
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posted November 16, 2018 02:23 PM
  
It was a mockery on an exquisite soul,
When it blossomed like cherries on a skeletal dole,
With Atlanta humming its beautiful sight,
Look it ridicules the bunch, wild and polite,
I step up and behold, the school of whales,
Giant in structure, gliding as Snail,
As they were doped with anesthesia, by a bunch of boffins,
Observant with the dose, to avoid the coffin,
I float in sky, with wings of carnivore,
Potentially bleating, with a pitch like yours,
All seems disdained, when they pluck to feed,
The only herb left, throttling like weed,
The whales in slumber, whistle umpteen,
Discarding any aid, in oceanic demean,
As monarch of sea, raving in revenge,
To be meddled with, to cause estrange,
Gliding with might, catching their pace,
The Whales too stoop, like human race,
Pious dwelling is left behind,
Human race doesn’t acknowledge, the spelling of “kind,”
Intruding the space, trespassing the route,
Deflating nature’s fury, blowing like flute,
To be taught a lesson, and displayed a scene,
That is filthy to behold, in an act obscene,
My wings they shrink, when ocean roared,
Descending the sky, only prayers I poured,
The bird eye view was about to go,
I looked for a boat, in ocean to row,
The Whales in sea, kindled like gold,
Lightening their aura, in multi-folds,
Consistent it was, their praiseworthy resilience,
When human displayed courage, negative of sense,
For they could not decipher, what Nature told,
They feted the ocean, with baits of gold,
Fobbing-off as casual, human souls were reared,
The Whales overturned the boat, with human blood smeared.IP: Logged |
Randall
Webmaster Posts: 103807
From: From a galaxy, far, far away...
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted November 17, 2018 12:34 PM
Vivid imagery.IP: Logged |
mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 10527
From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted November 17, 2018 01:37 PM
Wow.. yes, loved the Imagery.Have you been on whaling excursions or participating in environmental waters protection groups? Poignant messages of how abusive some are to the amount of damage they cause to water-animals, our oceans and ice-caps. Was it about governments too-- and their willingness to make money and use drugs on humans experimentally? Not taking the problems of addictions seriously enough? You also compare and allude (in some ways) to the use of consciousness-altering drugs? You know, we think we are so superior and advanced, scientifically, and we can't even honor the things that have been in place and in force here on this planet for thousands of centuries past. Save our Planet... Save our selves. Always great to read your work!  
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Ayelet
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Registered: Sep 2010
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posted November 19, 2018 11:57 AM
It is an important topic. You wrote it well into your tapestry IP: Logged |
Pearlty
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From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012
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posted November 19, 2018 12:56 PM
A look at the enviroment, and I can totally appreciate, thanks for your words the queen  IP: Logged |
thequeen
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Registered: Sep 2014
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posted November 20, 2018 03:05 PM
Hearty thanks to everybody..I wrote this one around two months ago. I don't know what came over me, or from where did I get the inspiration to pen it down, but I loved experimenting with this one. No mirage, I am really scared of water. I dont indulge in water sports either  This is just odd because words flew and I just jotted it down as is...great to see everybody commenting after so long..I missed this space/community/family of poets and talented writers.. IP: Logged |
Randall
Webmaster Posts: 103807
From: From a galaxy, far, far away...
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted November 21, 2018 06:19 PM
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Originally posted by thequeen:
Hearty thanks to everybody..I wrote this one around two months ago. I don't know what came over me, or from where did I get the inspiration to pen it down, but I loved experimenting with this one. No mirage, I am really scared of water. I dont indulge in water sports either This is just odd because words flew and I just jotted it down as is...great to see everybody commenting after so long..I missed this space/community/family of poets and talented writers..
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