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Topic: Haikindromes for All
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Chanterelle
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From: USA
Registered: Sep 2020
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posted September 26, 2020 09:06 AM
  
5-7-7-5. Bonus points if they come to you while driving.I.
Alone on the road,
a storm of wild lettuce seeds.
Twenty-nine bikers roll by;
one seed drifting down. II.
There’s a cloud hanging
over the mountain— No, wait!
There’s a cloud being born on
the mountain right now. IP: Logged |
mirage29
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Registered: May 2012
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posted September 26, 2020 09:50 AM
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Randall
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posted October 09, 2020 05:45 PM
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Chanterelle
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posted November 09, 2020 10:56 AM
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Chanterelle
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posted November 09, 2020 10:58 AM
C’mon, anybody? 5-7-7-5. Just give it a shot, next time you see something awesome, describe it like that. It’s not as hard as real haiku...IP: Logged |
Chanterelle
Knowflake Posts: 849
From: USA
Registered: Sep 2020
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posted December 02, 2020 08:17 PM
Articulated,
Punctured, severed, and still warm,
I’m kneeling by the roadside
With an eyeless hawk.IP: Logged |
Chanterelle
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posted December 02, 2020 08:17 PM
Why must it always be while driving?IP: Logged |
Randall
Webmaster Posts: 185931
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posted December 16, 2020 06:12 PM
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Ayelet
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Registered: Sep 2010
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posted December 17, 2020 08:48 AM
Awesome! I guess the fast motion while driving gives freedom to the mind, and so to the imagination...IP: Logged |
Chanterelle
Knowflake Posts: 849
From: USA
Registered: Sep 2020
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posted December 18, 2020 09:29 AM
It turns out it wasn’t a hawk, it was a juvenile barred owl. Haven’t made up my mind whether I need to revise in order to fit reality or not. IP: Logged |
mirage29
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Registered: May 2012
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posted December 18, 2020 09:51 AM
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mirage29
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posted December 18, 2020 10:03 AM
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Chanterelle
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Registered: Sep 2020
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posted January 05, 2021 07:07 AM
I miss my 40-mile commute too sometimes.IP: Logged |
Randall
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posted January 26, 2021 08:20 AM
I commuted in heavy traffic Atlanta for school.IP: Logged |
Chanterelle
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posted January 26, 2021 08:24 AM
Atlanta is known for that, isn’t it?IP: Logged |
Chanterelle
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posted February 14, 2021 06:30 AM
The rain has melted
The snow, and now on the ridge
The clouds have frozen themselves
Along the branches.IP: Logged |
Randall
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posted February 14, 2021 05:30 PM
Yeah, the traffic can be a nightmare.IP: Logged |
Chanterelle
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posted February 15, 2021 10:33 AM
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Randall
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posted April 20, 2021 06:43 PM
It was beyond a nightmare with a baseball game.IP: Logged |
LF DX
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From: Paraguay
Registered: Sep 2014
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posted April 20, 2021 11:43 PM
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No words on my mind
The muse no longer taps me
I miss the fire of writing
Hope you come back please
English, words, firestorm
I'm far from the motherland
But I miss your worplay girl
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Chanterelle
Knowflake Posts: 849
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Registered: Sep 2020
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posted May 22, 2021 10:49 AM
💫And I spaced out on responding here ages ago... thanks for playing! Your prize, should you choose to accept, is the right to re-name the 5-7-7-5 form... ‘haikindrome’ isn’t doing it for me. (Unless, of course, it already existed before I thought of it, in which case I would love to know.)
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Randall
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posted November 24, 2021 04:06 PM
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Randall
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posted December 18, 2021 05:51 PM
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Randall
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posted January 07, 2022 05:02 PM
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Randall
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posted February 24, 2022 04:16 PM
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