Posts: 1474
From: Toronto
Registered: Dec 2001

posted January 29, 2002 12:05 AM         

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SPIRAL SYMPHONY
It y.
‘s a special a m
ca e
d

Only people born of its founders can enter.

None of the students remember how they got there.

There are rarely visitors from outside. The students are often surprised
when they show up.

Once students graduate, the founders eat them.

T
h
e
n they are reborn, to the same people. The students remain
conscious throughout
everything.

It is done to prolong their lives. The students still remember everything they’ve
learned.

It keeps going until the students remember
who
they
really
are.

Then their flesh joins and they become the founders

Loving others, floating, free spirits

Feeling warm
Feeling safe
Feeling harmony.

Oded Aronson

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From: Louisiana
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posted January 29, 2002 01:17 AM         

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WOW

Good stuff, Spiritua

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YIVY
"Witchy Woman"

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From: California
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posted January 29, 2002 10:55 PM         

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From: Brooklyn, (and Norwich) NY, USA
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posted January 30, 2002 05:24 AM         

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Your poems are like the Pyramids in Egypt, somehow, somehow I know they will never crumble

Let me be put on the record as saying, I know Oded's work will be published, and I know it will be remembered by many

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posted January 30, 2002 01:03 PM         

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Spiritua~ I'm with Gooberlily, your work is Re-Mark-Able

~Princess

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~We can try many ways to get rid of the darkness, but none is as effective as simply increasing the light.~ UnkNown

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From: Columbus, GA USA
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posted April 11, 2002 09:51 AM         

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"It is never too late to become what you might have been." George Eliot

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From: Toronto
Registered: Dec 2001

posted June 24, 2002 01:57 AM         

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....I'm bringing this, yet another poem, back to the top for LMB.

Listen, LMB, it's okay if you don't read them all right away. I realize the list is a little overwhelming. Please just take your time, and tell me what you think about them whenever you feel like it. There's no rush.

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posted November 04, 2002 12:06 AM         

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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