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Topic: Only a Dream (poem)
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Sagaquari Knowflake Posts: 85 From: Rochester, New York USA Registered: Oct 2002
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posted November 09, 2002 03:55 PM
Only a Dream (2002, T.L. Pattison)I had a dream and you were there like you always are when I really need you. You touched my face brushed my hair away and kissed my lips as only you can do. You held me close with loving arms and didn't let go because you didn't want to. I let you in as I always have and I always will because I love you. Stirrings so sweet passions as strong the way it's always been between me and you. Never a doubt not a single fear only our love forever and true. Then I awoke with tears in my eyes I remembered my heart still missing you. IP: Logged |
aeon Knowflake Posts: 26 From: California, USA Registered: Aug 2001
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posted November 14, 2002 09:13 AM
Wow, that is so sweet and pretty. Do you ever go to Poetry.com? You can post origanal work, and they even award $prizes sometimes. As for Dreams, isn't it a great way to "cheat" sleep. To keep living the fullest life you can. I often have dreams so real, when I wake I have to think about if they actually occurred.IP: Logged |
Sagaquari Knowflake Posts: 85 From: Rochester, New York USA Registered: Oct 2002
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posted November 14, 2002 11:32 AM
I've had dreams like that, too. The last one had Robert Downey Jr. in it. I didn't interpret it litertally. I just woke up very happy. I just felt like something really good was going to happen. I'm still waiting.....!I've been to poetry.com. I've even entered a few poems. Never won though. IP: Logged |
taj Knowflake Posts: 530 From: Registered: Aug 2002
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posted November 19, 2002 04:31 AM
like aeon says, so sweet and pretty add 'very'.give us more, sagaquari. IP: Logged |