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Sagaquari
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From: Rochester, New York USA
Registered: Oct 2002

posted November 09, 2002 03:55 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Sagaquari     Edit/Delete Message
Only a Dream
(2002, T.L. Pattison)

I had a dream
and you were there
like you always are
when I really need you.

You touched my face
brushed my hair away
and kissed my lips
as only you can do.

You held me close
with loving arms
and didn't let go
because you didn't want to.

I let you in
as I always have
and I always will
because I love you.

Stirrings so sweet
passions as strong
the way it's always been
between me and you.

Never a doubt
not a single fear
only our love
forever and true.

Then I awoke
with tears in my eyes
I remembered my heart
still missing you.

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aeon
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From: California, USA
Registered: Aug 2001

posted November 14, 2002 09:13 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for aeon     Edit/Delete Message
Wow, that is so sweet and pretty. Do you ever go to Poetry.com? You can post origanal work, and they even award $prizes sometimes.
As for Dreams, isn't it a great way to "cheat" sleep. To keep living the fullest life you can. I often have dreams so real, when I wake I have to think about if they actually occurred.

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Sagaquari
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From: Rochester, New York USA
Registered: Oct 2002

posted November 14, 2002 11:32 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Sagaquari     Edit/Delete Message
I've had dreams like that, too. The last one had Robert Downey Jr. in it. I didn't interpret it litertally. I just woke up very happy. I just felt like something really good was going to happen. I'm still waiting.....!

I've been to poetry.com. I've even entered a few poems. Never won though.

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taj
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posted November 19, 2002 04:31 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for taj     Edit/Delete Message
like aeon says, so sweet and pretty
add 'very'.

give us more, sagaquari.

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