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posted November 13, 2002 08:20 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Worldly Man's Advocate     Edit/Delete Message
The Poem

A title. Lines, neatly stacked.
Words. Often they rhyme.
A theme emerges. How well articulated!
Written, re-written, polished, it shines!
I pray that none of these my poems will make.

Let my mind, heart, soul, boil out into a quivering hand
And in that hand let there be clutched some writing implement
Clutched with all my might as if with me 'twas born
There is ye exit my thoughts, out, Out
Damn ye Boil Out!

Nay, 'twill not boil out
My magnificent mind, crafted by deamons, angels, saints, madmen
Magnificent in its need, lack, want and hunger
Corrupt. Now the mind wants the straight line
A beginning, an end, a uniform, - a dread.

Here I rage, I cry out, I pray, I doubt
Look again.
At the top: a title. Content: neat five line stacks.
Punctuation perfect; here comes a full stop.
Rescue me from myself.

Let not this mind speak out
Let it screech, roar, rant and rave.
Save it from contentment
Feed it on the Self
My mind will begin anew, but here this poem must end.

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Sher bear
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posted November 13, 2002 09:41 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Sher bear     Edit/Delete Message
Te, He....Love it !!! How about some more?

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taj
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posted November 19, 2002 04:16 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for taj     Edit/Delete Message

hah!
such life!!!
whooppee!

ok, wma, this is absolutely, definitely

animated.
vigorous.
breathing.

it just makes you want to
can't help it.

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posted November 19, 2002 05:10 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Worldly Man's Advocate     Edit/Delete Message
What's going on here? I posted this topic ages ago. Does this site auto-resend topics or something?

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dafremen
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posted November 19, 2002 08:22 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for dafremen     Edit/Delete Message
The poem that would not die?!

"Would that the unknown thought could plead it's case for being known." - Me

8) Daf

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