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Topic: Sher-bear, now you owe me two
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Worldly Man's Advocate
Knowflake Posts: 29
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Registered: Nov 2002
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posted November 19, 2002 01:51 AM
 
Dafremon, my favourite was hero's bed. The regular structure was perfect for the military theme. Sher Bear, you're falling behind now!!!
I was playing with a structure last night; it's not perfectly regular in places, but I'm beginning to understand that that's not so important.--------------------------- From high and bright and unknown spheres
Fall gliding silv’ry swans
Subtle but strong, acting without pause
Murm’ring lies of new Dawns. Blest is he who hears this promise
Dimly he senses a Flame
But cursed is He who lusts for Truth
To die becomes his aim. Music from the one True Source
It bears the Seal of Doom.
It blasts a hole in this dark night
Smashes nature’s pretty bloom. When Nature lit our passions within
She gave too Earthly pleasures.
So men quenched lawless senses
On kind Nature’s plentiful treasures. But the One whispers of bril’liant spheres
And shows them nailed into Night.
It makes us reach for far off heavens
And laughs at our feeble might.
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Sher bear
Knowflake Posts: 161
From: Canada
Registered: Nov 2002
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posted November 20, 2002 01:12 AM
O.k, The pressures on - I think I'm going to have to dig out some of my writing....to be quite honest I haven't written in a while....I do have some recent things, but everything seems so tortured......Anyhow, I've been inspired lately, and so maybe I'll just pick-up my pen......Lots of love to you, and I'll give ya something soon....Oh, almost forgot - I love the pictures you create in my mind words...yes..as well as feeling...you blend both......Hmmm.....BLEZZINGs to you...and yes, I now owe you - but please, give us more to read.......XoXoXoIP: Logged |
Worldly Man's Advocate
Knowflake Posts: 29
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Registered: Nov 2002
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posted November 20, 2002 01:29 AM
well, I'm going to join you, Sher Bear, looks like. I started this evening course, 'Art of Living' (anyone hear of it/tried it?) - it's very good; it's based on yoga but has a nice structure (and you all know how I like structured things); the main goal is to boost energy levels and awareness, and after just last night I can feel a big difference.So no new poems for the next few nights. Still, here's a poem from the other night: One day, I will find the One
And know its deep full bliss.
For now, it hides behind a veil
Secret its lovely name. In many faces have I searched
My gaze stopped more than once
I sought union, I thought to join
My greed I called it Love. A valiant soldier, called to battle
I strove for the fairest hand.
To smash, to conquer fellow man
I made my love a trophy. Fueled by Lust, my urge to win
I tore my peace to shreds.
Snorting ‘Unjust!’, I cursed the Gods
But hid from blame my pride. But now I see, for I did lose
That which made me full.
Look! I bow, I drop my swagger
Please, let fall Your veil. -------------
Keep well,
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