Posts: 714
From: USA
Registered: Nov 2001

posted October 12, 2002 06:21 PM         

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09/25/02

The rollicking sobs
lie in the pit of essence
Untapped and dissolving
the mortal resolve

Cordant melodies
run through every vein
Blocks breathing with,
inchoate anger

Nothing matters anymore
Deadening agression overflows
Weak mud statuettes of reality
easily shattered in long surpressed strokes

Pitted to the painful pattern
eager response leaves no remains
gone is it, the happy vengence
with a final choke

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-K
"Most people love with restraint
As if they were someday to hate
We hated gently, carefully
As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight

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From: Belfast, Ireland
Registered: Jul 2002

posted October 13, 2002 01:57 PM         

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Virgo thats a very brave poem, not everyone poets the darkness so directly.
Have u any more?

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From: Columbus, GA USA
Registered: Nov 2000

posted December 26, 2002 11:25 PM         

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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From: USA
Registered: Nov 2001

posted March 08, 2003 12:41 AM         

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bringing to top...

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