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Topic: A couple of my poems
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RubyRedRam unregistered
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posted April 04, 2003 01:41 AM
Okay, I really like this forum so I guess I should contribute. Here goes:Walking through our sunny days, with cloudless sky’s and star filled nights, the wondrous path beneath the moon, that led the way to mystic days, to cryptic nights of vivid dreams, that reassured my soul, my heart the other side that made it right, before confusion deterred illusion with superstition or my suspicion, conveniently reassured by the force within the subconscious mind, or supernatural kind, leading me through the cloud filled days and moonless nights, the twinkling lights all but gone, within infinity until divinity conquers, gains,love retains, my spirit free, my soul to be, forever at peace with you and me. By RRR.
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RubyRedRam unregistered
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posted April 04, 2003 01:52 AM
The beautiful sound of radiance fills the air, soft droplets of sweet harmony fall in the trees and a mystic light shines on the city. The people embrace comfort, with a glow of happiness surrounding their spirit, elegance is paraded upon every path and cleanliness gleams in the mystic light. Reality is lucid and liquid defying the night sky, freedom spreads itself on the abundance of luscious green lawn, flowers of unity grow in every groomed garden. Love is inhaled with every breath, and peace adorning the day of bliss, the day...infinite.By RRR.
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jjjax Knowflake Posts: 285 From: Sydney, Australia Registered: Jan 2003
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posted April 04, 2003 04:30 AM
Beautiful Ruby! I love the images they create in my minds eye Jax IP: Logged |
Imaiden76 Knowflake Posts: 87 From: NY Registered: Feb 2002
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posted April 04, 2003 03:11 PM
WHOA! THAT GAVE ME THE CHILLS!BEAUTIFUL CHILLS! OR as I call them the sparkles.Kind of like the goose bumps but in a positive,loving lightful way, as if something rings true. Marcie IP: Logged |
Aphrodite Moderator Posts: 3280 From: San Francisco, CA, United States Registered: Feb 2002
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posted April 04, 2003 03:20 PM
Wow RRR, beautiful poems!!!IP: Logged |
taj Knowflake Posts: 530 From: Registered: Aug 2002
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posted April 05, 2003 12:30 AM
GREAT poems, RRR. the second one is so picture-perfect and can really make one IP: Logged |
RubyRedRam unregistered
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posted April 05, 2003 03:19 AM
Thank you so much guys!! IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 16464 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Nov 2000
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posted April 05, 2003 11:16 AM
------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 16464 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Nov 2000
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posted April 06, 2003 09:16 AM
Do you have any others? ------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
RubyRedRam unregistered
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posted April 06, 2003 09:27 AM
Good morning Randall!!Yes.....I will try and find some I can share IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 16464 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Nov 2000
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posted April 07, 2003 12:55 PM
------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
Virgo-AriesArtist Moderator Posts: 714 From: USA Registered: Nov 2001
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posted May 24, 2003 07:35 PM
Beautiful imagery, RRR. It takes my breath away... ------------------ -K "Most people love with restraint As if they were someday to hate We hated gently, carefully As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight IP: Logged |