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Topic: a passionate poem
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Virgo-AriesArtist Moderator Posts: 714 From: USA Registered: Nov 2001
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posted April 28, 2003 07:57 PM
4/28/03What could I want to try to say, When my senses overload? The moment we began that dance And knew we couldn’t stop… The taunting step that pushed the game Fully amative in tone The yearning roughness of his skin Coming through in the strokes Of the palms upon my back The minds unaware for an instant As I casually drift through the room Ignoring his presence to maintain poise Yet longing to know how he feels Purposeful fingers brush nudging my shoulder Then all of a sudden the mood of the past Ripens into a united affair Delving for the vincible points His hands bare the curve of my waist Ultimately exposing the hidden spot Delightedly caresses me Bringing jointly satisfied submission Summons my company time and time again Desires to suggest with song An assuring possessive attitude I receptively return Responding with a matching passion Finding excuses bolstering touch and reach Massaging his hair down to the neck stealing a petting stroke in passing Always following the eager leads Still, never desiring the final union Of mind, body, and soul we both still reserve that special act for the marital promise day
------------------ -K "Most people love with restraint As if they were someday to hate We hated gently, carefully As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 16464 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Nov 2000
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posted April 28, 2003 08:27 PM
------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
Virgo-AriesArtist Moderator Posts: 714 From: USA Registered: Nov 2001
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posted April 28, 2003 09:39 PM
Thanks Randall... ------------------ -K "Most people love with restraint As if they were someday to hate We hated gently, carefully As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 16464 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Nov 2000
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posted April 30, 2003 11:32 AM
No--thank you! ------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
juniperb Moderator Posts: 3936 From: www.Heaven.Home Registered: Mar 2002
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posted May 01, 2003 07:23 PM
Sigh, be still my heart... That is absolutely beautiful VAA juniperb IP: Logged |
Sher bear Knowflake Posts: 161 From: Canada Registered: Nov 2002
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posted May 01, 2003 10:18 PM
My heart skipped a beat....... IP: Logged |
Virgo-AriesArtist Moderator Posts: 714 From: USA Registered: Nov 2001
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posted May 01, 2003 11:38 PM
Thanks you guys.... I really appreciate the feedback...and its so nice to have such a receptive audience. Let's keep on building this forum into the comfiest little forum it can be. and blowing a LindaLand to all...
------------------ -K "Most people love with restraint As if they were someday to hate We hated gently, carefully As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 16464 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Nov 2000
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posted May 02, 2003 11:05 AM
------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
Lunargirl Knowflake Posts: 1513 From: south of utopia Registered: Mar 2003
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posted May 02, 2003 01:38 PM
Great poem, Virgo-AriesArtist!Leads you one way then dips you another! I like all the nuances you captured! Lunargirl IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 16464 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Nov 2000
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posted May 03, 2003 02:31 PM
So do I. ------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
Virgo-AriesArtist Moderator Posts: 714 From: USA Registered: Nov 2001
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posted May 04, 2003 04:48 PM
Thank you for the encouragement... IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 16464 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Nov 2000
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posted May 06, 2003 03:33 PM
Lots of silent readers around here. C'mon, don't be shy. Feel free to contribute. ------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
Virgo-AriesArtist Moderator Posts: 714 From: USA Registered: Nov 2001
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posted May 14, 2003 12:26 PM
Yeah, come on...I hear the creative juices flowing...more poetry, more artwork, more song lyrics.... ------------------ -K "Most people love with restraint As if they were someday to hate We hated gently, carefully As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight IP: Logged |