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Virgo-AriesArtist
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posted April 28, 2003 07:57 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Virgo-AriesArtist     Edit/Delete Message
4/28/03

What could I want to try to say,
When my senses overload?
The moment we began that dance
And knew we couldn’t stop…
The taunting step that pushed the game
Fully amative in tone
The yearning roughness of his skin
Coming through in the strokes
Of the palms upon my back
The minds unaware for an instant
As I casually drift through the room
Ignoring his presence to maintain poise
Yet longing to know how he feels
Purposeful fingers brush
nudging my shoulder
Then all of a sudden the mood of the past
Ripens into a united affair
Delving for the vincible points
His hands bare the curve of my waist
Ultimately exposing the hidden spot
Delightedly caresses me
Bringing jointly satisfied submission
Summons my company time and time again
Desires to suggest with song
An assuring possessive attitude
I receptively return
Responding with a matching passion
Finding excuses bolstering touch and reach
Massaging his hair down to the neck
stealing a petting stroke in passing
Always following the eager leads
Still, never desiring the final union
Of mind, body, and soul
we both still reserve that special act
for the marital promise day

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-K
"Most people love with restraint
As if they were someday to hate
We hated gently, carefully
As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight

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Randall
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posted April 28, 2003 08:27 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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Virgo-AriesArtist
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posted April 28, 2003 09:39 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Virgo-AriesArtist     Edit/Delete Message
Thanks Randall...

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-K
"Most people love with restraint
As if they were someday to hate
We hated gently, carefully
As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight

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Randall
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posted April 30, 2003 11:32 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message
No--thank you!

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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juniperb
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posted May 01, 2003 07:23 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for juniperb     Edit/Delete Message
Sigh, be still my heart... That is absolutely beautiful VAA

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Sher bear
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posted May 01, 2003 10:18 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Sher bear     Edit/Delete Message
My heart skipped a beat.......

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Virgo-AriesArtist
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posted May 01, 2003 11:38 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Virgo-AriesArtist     Edit/Delete Message
Thanks you guys....
I really appreciate the feedback...and its so nice to have such a receptive audience.
Let's keep on building this forum into the comfiest little forum it can be.
and
blowing a LindaLand to all...

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-K
"Most people love with restraint
As if they were someday to hate
We hated gently, carefully
As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight

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Randall
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posted May 02, 2003 11:05 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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Lunargirl
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posted May 02, 2003 01:38 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Lunargirl     Edit/Delete Message
Great poem, Virgo-AriesArtist!

Leads you one way then dips you another! I like all the nuances you captured!

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Randall
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posted May 03, 2003 02:31 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message
So do I.

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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Virgo-AriesArtist
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posted May 04, 2003 04:48 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Virgo-AriesArtist     Edit/Delete Message
Thank you for the encouragement...

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Randall
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posted May 06, 2003 03:33 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message
Lots of silent readers around here. C'mon, don't be shy. Feel free to contribute.

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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Virgo-AriesArtist
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posted May 14, 2003 12:26 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Virgo-AriesArtist     Edit/Delete Message
Yeah, come on...I hear the creative juices flowing...more poetry, more artwork, more song lyrics....

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-K
"Most people love with restraint
As if they were someday to hate
We hated gently, carefully
As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight

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