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hrj777
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posted May 09, 2003 11:25 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for hrj777     Edit/Delete Message
DECEMBER

December came this year with sunshine,
Like a crystal clear spring day,
Rays of hope, a new tomorrow,
Recalling dreams of yesterday

In a place now long forgotten
But the memories linger still
Where a song could heal the wounded
And a wish could cure the ill.

In a world that knew no hatred,
Where we knew no fear or pain.
Instead of enmity and violence,
Love was all we had to gain.

But those memories now are fading,
Fragments lost amongst our dreams
And our songs of Love and Magic
Turn to suffering and screams.

In a world of contradictions,
Games, deception, lies and schemes.
What appears upon the surface
Is really nothing as it seems.

Wanting love is now a weakness,
Needing people is a sin,
Being honest makes you feeble.
Hide your tears behind a grin.

Wanting warmth now makes you needy,
Showing passion is a crime,
Commitment is a violation,
Trust is just a waste of time.

Though December's warmth has gone now,
I'll believe the stars above.
There's somewhere warm and kind and gentle
Ruled by innocence and love.

by hrj777

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Virgo-AriesArtist
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posted May 09, 2003 11:47 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Virgo-AriesArtist     Edit/Delete Message
To be truly, and utterly honest, Heidi.....
That just took my breath away!
What magical and well-put verse.
And sadly enough, so true about how our society is changing, cutting and demeaning real raw emotions.
Again, big thumbs up!

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-K
"Most people love with restraint
As if they were someday to hate
We hated gently, carefully
As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight

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pearly
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posted May 10, 2003 12:25 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for pearly     Edit/Delete Message
That's great, hrj777!!

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juniperb
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posted May 10, 2003 08:20 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for juniperb     Edit/Delete Message
Soul touching hrj777

It reminded me of the majick of faeries and the need to BELIEVE...

juniperb

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Randall
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posted May 10, 2003 11:10 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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hrj777
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posted May 11, 2003 12:54 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for hrj777     Edit/Delete Message
Thank you for the compliments. Much appreciated.

Heidi

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Randall
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posted May 12, 2003 08:35 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message
As a Cappy, I can relate.

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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Lunargirl
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posted May 13, 2003 05:28 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Lunargirl     Edit/Delete Message

Hardly "typical", Heidi.

I really like the 6th stanza.

cheers,
Lunargitl

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Twin Lady
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posted May 13, 2003 07:14 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Twin Lady     Edit/Delete Message
Beautiful, Heidi!

I'm sure many will relate to this; for me, as one Lunar Scorpion from another. It touches on feelings I carry but rarely express.

Good job!

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"Yes, I am a dreamer. For a dreamer is one who can find his way by moonlight, and see the dawn before the rest of the world."
Oscar Wilde

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Aphrodite
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posted October 02, 2003 02:50 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Aphrodite     Edit/Delete Message
I had read this before and thought it was beautiful. Still do. Thank you.

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