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Topic: The Soothing Tempest of Truth
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dafremen Knowflake Posts: 1359 From: Registered: Nov 2002
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posted June 27, 2003 02:53 AM
The Soothing Tempest of Truth R. Dafremen Eat no more than you have eaten Drink your fill and be done Match the frequency of your giving To the rate of your consumption Too many times the thoughtlessness Rings my hands Through my clenching stomach Beckoning unto my human nature If it's not intoxicating in its stench Then why does it call me out From this mystic place Peaceful place where my heart resides? Dropping me to my godless knees As want is its own volition Vice squeezes the life from us Yet spurs us on and away And the soothing tempest of truth Remains behind Awhirl in the maelstrom IP: Logged |
Virgo-AriesArtist Knowflake Posts: 1409 From: USA Registered: Nov 2001
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posted June 28, 2003 12:39 AM
Astounding imagery, dafremen. I could feel every reaction with you. Bravo! Keep up the good work.------------------ -K "Most people love with restraint As if they were someday to hate We hated gently, carefully As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight IP: Logged |