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Topic: Singluth
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Virgo-AriesArtist Moderator Posts: 714 From: USA Registered: Nov 2001
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posted June 28, 2003 12:37 AM
6/27/03I hate to be alone I want to be part of one But until I learn to depend on myself I am reduced to belonging to none Desiring sensual attention From a soul feeling genuine mutual affection Brilliant verbal sparks Deepen this real and future relation ------------------ -K "Most people love with restraint As if they were someday to hate We hated gently, carefully As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight IP: Logged |
taj Knowflake Posts: 530 From: Registered: Aug 2002
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posted June 28, 2003 05:33 AM
seems your virgo is showing VAA, in second to last line. i like the stark simplicity of the first stanza. IP: Logged |
taj Knowflake Posts: 530 From: Registered: Aug 2002
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posted June 28, 2003 05:37 AM
what's with the title, by the way?IP: Logged |
juniperb Moderator Posts: 3936 From: www.Heaven.Home Registered: Mar 2002
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posted June 28, 2003 08:28 AM
'First k-now thys-elf'. VAA, as always, your depth of insight is refreshing and touching!! juniperb IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 16464 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Nov 2000
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posted June 29, 2003 07:31 AM
------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
Virgo-AriesArtist Moderator Posts: 714 From: USA Registered: Nov 2001
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posted June 29, 2003 09:03 AM
Thanks again for the response! Taj, as far as the title goes, I have this fascination with creating words, words that combine one or more concepts in an effort to more accurately describe what I'm communicating. Therefore, with this poem, the title is a blend of the words "single", as representing my current relationship state, and "truth", representing the drastic realization I came to. These combine to form "singluth".
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juniperb Moderator Posts: 3936 From: www.Heaven.Home Registered: Mar 2002
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posted June 29, 2003 09:31 AM
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Randall Webmaster Posts: 16464 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Nov 2000
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posted June 30, 2003 02:29 PM
Cool! I was wondering about the title myself. ------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
taj Knowflake Posts: 530 From: Registered: Aug 2002
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posted July 01, 2003 09:25 AM
i figured the "sing" part. wondered about the "luth" nice! IP: Logged |