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Virgo-AriesArtist
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posted June 28, 2003 12:37 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Virgo-AriesArtist     Edit/Delete Message
6/27/03

I hate to be alone
I want to be part of one
But until I learn to depend on myself
I am reduced to belonging to none

Desiring sensual attention
From a soul feeling genuine mutual affection
Brilliant verbal sparks
Deepen this real and future relation

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-K
"Most people love with restraint
As if they were someday to hate
We hated gently, carefully
As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight

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taj
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posted June 28, 2003 05:33 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for taj     Edit/Delete Message
seems your virgo is showing VAA, in second to last line.

i like the stark simplicity of the first stanza.

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taj
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posted June 28, 2003 05:37 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for taj     Edit/Delete Message
what's with the title, by the way?

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juniperb
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posted June 28, 2003 08:28 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for juniperb     Edit/Delete Message
'First k-now thys-elf'. VAA, as always, your depth of insight is refreshing and touching!!

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Randall
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posted June 29, 2003 07:31 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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Virgo-AriesArtist
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posted June 29, 2003 09:03 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Virgo-AriesArtist     Edit/Delete Message
Thanks again for the response!
Taj, as far as the title goes, I have this fascination with creating words, words that combine one or more concepts in an effort to more accurately describe what I'm communicating. Therefore, with this poem, the title is a blend of the words "single", as representing my current relationship state, and "truth", representing the drastic realization I came to. These combine to form "singluth".

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"Most people love with restraint
As if they were someday to hate
We hated gently, carefully
As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight

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juniperb
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Randall
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posted June 30, 2003 02:29 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message
Cool! I was wondering about the title myself.

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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taj
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posted July 01, 2003 09:25 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for taj     Edit/Delete Message
i figured the "sing" part. wondered about the "luth"

nice!

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