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Topic: A Poem I Wrote...
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dorkus_malorkus
Knowflake Posts: 309
From: Alturas, California USA
Registered: Jun 2003
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posted July 19, 2003 07:04 PM
 
Um now I'm not really one of those phenomenal writers ya hear about on the CNN or the NBC, but here goes a poem I wrote a while back 'bout an acquiantance of mine. It's simply titled "Allison."Allison pays me no mind
Allison doesn't give me the time
I went to her house
And she was not there
I stole her blouse
And then she was bare...
And then I rustled her tussle. IP: Logged |
silverbells
Knowflake Posts: 977
From: maryland
Registered: Apr 2003
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posted July 20, 2003 01:43 AM
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Aphrodite
Moderator Posts: 3280
From: San Francisco, CA, United States
Registered: Feb 2002
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posted October 02, 2003 02:47 PM
 Have you given Allison her shirt back? You naughty girl. Hehe. IP: Logged |
dorkus_malorkus
Knowflake Posts: 309
From: Alturas, California USA
Registered: Jun 2003
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posted October 02, 2003 04:43 PM
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Aphrodite
Moderator Posts: 3280
From: San Francisco, CA, United States
Registered: Feb 2002
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posted October 03, 2003 11:48 AM
No answer . . . I'll assume you ate the shirt. Hehe.  You should write some more poems, you have a talent in playing with the ideas of what's not said in the reader's mind. Truly.IP: Logged |
dorkus_malorkus
Knowflake Posts: 309
From: Alturas, California USA
Registered: Jun 2003
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posted October 03, 2003 06:08 PM
Thanks Aphrodite! I shall write some more if I can find the time and the inspiration!!!IP: Logged |
Randall
Webmaster Posts: 16464
From: Columbus, GA USA
Registered: Nov 2000
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posted October 04, 2003 12:21 PM
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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
Randall
Webmaster Posts: 16464
From: Columbus, GA USA
Registered: Nov 2000
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posted October 05, 2003 11:58 AM
Rustled her tussle? ------------------
"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
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