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anafaery
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posted August 04, 2003 11:49 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for anafaery     Edit/Delete Message
hmm finally i am sharing some of my poetry here. dunno why, just figure i have to post at least once in every forum

untitled

a pressed flower in a book
the blossom past, its colours
still vibrant, it lingers now
as evidence of life. though
it now be pristine and
brittle these petals once were
moist and supple as something
healthy and growing
should be.

it is pressed flat, condensed
as if taking up too much space
were detrimental. and if handled too
much, would it splinter like
a piece of aged parchment
with care given too little
too late? grievous mistake.
if i added water, would it
revive its tenacity? for i
cannot live
without my sexuality.

that was written during a dry spell, LOLOLOLOL!!! hah im so cheeky

poetry is so healing, isnt it?

just thought id share some of what ive written.

~faery

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where i end and you begin there's a gap in between there's a gap where we meet where i end and you begin
and i'm sorry for us the dinosaurs roam the earth the sky turns green where i end and you begin

i am up in the clouds i am up in the clouds and i can't and i can't come down

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Twin Lady
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posted August 04, 2003 11:55 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Twin Lady     Edit/Delete Message
LOL, yes cheeky!

Very nice; I liked it ana.

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"Yes, I am a dreamer. For a dreamer is one who can find his way by moonlight, and see the dawn before the rest of the world."
Oscar Wilde

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anafaery
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posted August 05, 2003 02:32 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for anafaery     Edit/Delete Message
aw thanks Lady

poetry was how i used to deal with my emotions. its been useful

now i am more able to verbalize my emotions directly so i dont use poetry that often. its a pity in a way i guess, but if the ability to write verse comes back, i wont mind.

~ana

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where i end and you begin there's a gap in between there's a gap where we meet where i end and you begin
and i'm sorry for us the dinosaurs roam the earth the sky turns green where i end and you begin

i am up in the clouds i am up in the clouds and i can't and i can't come down

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dafremen
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posted August 05, 2003 12:46 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for dafremen     Edit/Delete Message
That was very clever double entendre there faery. Thanks for sharing. I hope you share more...

Daf

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Randall
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posted August 05, 2003 01:26 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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anafaery
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posted August 05, 2003 06:52 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for anafaery     Edit/Delete Message
thanks daf and randall

i have a few more up me sleeve, ill bring another out soon, i promise

i should also start reading some of the posts in here. i like to read poetry when i am calm and nothing much is going on, otherwise i cant appreciate it as much. hopefully soon that will happen ^_^

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where i end and you begin there's a gap in between there's a gap where we meet where i end and you begin
and i'm sorry for us the dinosaurs roam the earth the sky turns green where i end and you begin

i am up in the clouds i am up in the clouds and i can't and i can't come down

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silverbells
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posted August 06, 2003 02:39 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for silverbells     Edit/Delete Message
Yeeeheeeheee!! That was an exciting poem. I didn't see the end coming.

I realize that this may be off of the beaten path but what did you say your moon sign was anafaery?

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anafaery
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posted August 06, 2003 03:03 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for anafaery     Edit/Delete Message
aries. opposed jupiter, oddly enough nothing else in my libra stellium. its the least aspected planet in my chart, with only that opposition, a trine to my asc oppo mc, but nothing else. even chiron has more aspects, actually he has the most, and they are both in aries. me and my complex chart lol.

~ana, REALLY off to bed this time

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where i end and you begin there's a gap in between there's a gap where we meet where i end and you begin
and i'm sorry for us the dinosaurs roam the earth the sky turns green where i end and you begin

i am up in the clouds i am up in the clouds and i can't and i can't come down

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silverbells
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posted August 06, 2003 03:27 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for silverbells     Edit/Delete Message

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silverbells
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posted August 06, 2003 05:58 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for silverbells     Edit/Delete Message
Oh no. I just saw that my heading smilie was a thumbs down. Maybe that was my Higher S-elf sayin thumbs down to nightime sleep. Or perhaps I just mistook one thumb smilie for another. In any event, no bad feelings.

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silverbells
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posted August 06, 2003 06:11 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for silverbells     Edit/Delete Message
Or perhaps I was balancing the thumbs-up smilie in the interest of contributing a (?)neutral(?) stance toward something in your post!!!! Okay bye.

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