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anafaery Knowflake Posts: 863 From: west coast, yummy rain forest, canada Registered: Jun 2003
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posted August 04, 2003 11:49 PM
hmm finally i am sharing some of my poetry here. dunno why, just figure i have to post at least once in every forum untitled a pressed flower in a book the blossom past, its colours still vibrant, it lingers now as evidence of life. though it now be pristine and brittle these petals once were moist and supple as something healthy and growing should be. it is pressed flat, condensed as if taking up too much space were detrimental. and if handled too much, would it splinter like a piece of aged parchment with care given too little too late? grievous mistake. if i added water, would it revive its tenacity? for i cannot live without my sexuality. that was written during a dry spell, LOLOLOLOL!!! hah im so cheeky poetry is so healing, isnt it? just thought id share some of what ive written. ~faery
------------------ where i end and you begin there's a gap in between there's a gap where we meet where i end and you begin and i'm sorry for us the dinosaurs roam the earth the sky turns green where i end and you begin i am up in the clouds i am up in the clouds and i can't and i can't come down IP: Logged |
Twin Lady Knowflake Posts: 535 From: USA Registered: Jan 2003
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posted August 04, 2003 11:55 PM
LOL, yes cheeky! Very nice; I liked it ana. ------------------ "Yes, I am a dreamer. For a dreamer is one who can find his way by moonlight, and see the dawn before the rest of the world." Oscar Wilde IP: Logged |
anafaery Knowflake Posts: 863 From: west coast, yummy rain forest, canada Registered: Jun 2003
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posted August 05, 2003 02:32 AM
aw thanks Lady poetry was how i used to deal with my emotions. its been useful now i am more able to verbalize my emotions directly so i dont use poetry that often. its a pity in a way i guess, but if the ability to write verse comes back, i wont mind. ~ana ------------------ where i end and you begin there's a gap in between there's a gap where we meet where i end and you begin and i'm sorry for us the dinosaurs roam the earth the sky turns green where i end and you begin i am up in the clouds i am up in the clouds and i can't and i can't come down IP: Logged |
dafremen Knowflake Posts: 538 From: Registered: Nov 2002
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posted August 05, 2003 12:46 PM
That was very clever double entendre there faery. Thanks for sharing. I hope you share more... Daf IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 16464 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Nov 2000
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posted August 05, 2003 01:26 PM
------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
anafaery Knowflake Posts: 863 From: west coast, yummy rain forest, canada Registered: Jun 2003
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posted August 05, 2003 06:52 PM
thanks daf and randall i have a few more up me sleeve, ill bring another out soon, i promise i should also start reading some of the posts in here. i like to read poetry when i am calm and nothing much is going on, otherwise i cant appreciate it as much. hopefully soon that will happen ^_^ ------------------ where i end and you begin there's a gap in between there's a gap where we meet where i end and you begin and i'm sorry for us the dinosaurs roam the earth the sky turns green where i end and you begin i am up in the clouds i am up in the clouds and i can't and i can't come down IP: Logged |
silverbells Knowflake Posts: 977 From: maryland Registered: Apr 2003
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posted August 06, 2003 02:39 AM
Yeeeheeeheee!! That was an exciting poem. I didn't see the end coming. I realize that this may be off of the beaten path but what did you say your moon sign was anafaery? IP: Logged |
anafaery Knowflake Posts: 863 From: west coast, yummy rain forest, canada Registered: Jun 2003
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posted August 06, 2003 03:03 AM
aries. opposed jupiter, oddly enough nothing else in my libra stellium. its the least aspected planet in my chart, with only that opposition, a trine to my asc oppo mc, but nothing else. even chiron has more aspects, actually he has the most, and they are both in aries. me and my complex chart lol. ~ana, REALLY off to bed this time ------------------ where i end and you begin there's a gap in between there's a gap where we meet where i end and you begin and i'm sorry for us the dinosaurs roam the earth the sky turns green where i end and you begin i am up in the clouds i am up in the clouds and i can't and i can't come down IP: Logged |
silverbells Knowflake Posts: 977 From: maryland Registered: Apr 2003
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posted August 06, 2003 03:27 AM
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silverbells Knowflake Posts: 977 From: maryland Registered: Apr 2003
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posted August 06, 2003 05:58 PM
Oh no. I just saw that my heading smilie was a thumbs down. Maybe that was my Higher S-elf sayin thumbs down to nightime sleep. Or perhaps I just mistook one thumb smilie for another. In any event, no bad feelings. IP: Logged |
silverbells Knowflake Posts: 977 From: maryland Registered: Apr 2003
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posted August 06, 2003 06:11 PM
Or perhaps I was balancing the thumbs-up smilie in the interest of contributing a (?)neutral(?) stance toward something in your post!!!! Okay bye.
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