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Pink Angel
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From: India
Registered: Jul 2003

posted August 30, 2003 10:37 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pink Angel     Edit/Delete Message
Hi, im new to this forum... and have never tried poetry as such, so i just started some 15 minutes ago :d
Please dont laugh at me I'm just 18 years old
here goes....

My life was like a flower
Just waiting to bloom
I was so untouched
Until you came my way
Then everything changed
I knew it was love
Because when you left
My heart used to cry
Oh why oh why
Do you give me such pain?
And yet, I still love you
Why do you play this game?
I know that we are meant to be
And know that forever we will be
together...someday

My life was like a cloud
So light and grey
It was full of hope for a bright sunny day
But the day you stepped into my sky
My cloud went dry
i started to cry.. tears of happiness and sadness too
I couldnt control my emotions, I didnt know ehat to do
You showed me what life was meant to be
But how can you disappear without a trace?
How can that be?

This angel wipes her bright pink nose
And tries to hide, but knows it shows
She feels so helpless and lame in love
How can you do this to me, o lord above
You said that everyones always happy in the end
But im not happy
So is this the end?

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Virgo-AriesArtist
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From: USA
Registered: Nov 2001

posted August 30, 2003 01:36 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Virgo-AriesArtist     Edit/Delete Message
Sweet one, Pink Angel...!
And no, no one would ever laugh at such an honest and touching expression of heartfelt words.
You are welcome to share whatever words strike your mind, all future poetic expressions... We are an open-minded, and caring group. Stick around and you will be glad you did.
Love and Lite ,
a fellow poet and your friendly moderator

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-K
"Most people love with restraint
As if they were someday to hate
We hated gently, carefully
As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight

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dafremen
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posted August 30, 2003 03:57 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for dafremen     Edit/Delete Message
That was very heartfelt and sincere. Thanks for sharing.

Daf

Oh and welcome to Lindaland!

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purplezen
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From: outer space
Registered: Aug 2003

posted August 30, 2003 08:45 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for purplezen     Edit/Delete Message
pink angel, that is a very nice poem.

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Pink Angel
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From: India
Registered: Jul 2003

posted August 31, 2003 01:28 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pink Angel     Edit/Delete Message
Thanks for all the encouragement!

Hi virgo! Hi daf!
Hey purple!!

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Randall
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From: Columbus, GA USA
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posted August 31, 2003 05:12 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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Aphrodite
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posted September 03, 2003 02:44 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Aphrodite     Edit/Delete Message
Lovely

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