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Topic: My first poem
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Pink Angel Knowflake Posts: 201 From: India Registered: Jul 2003
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posted August 30, 2003 10:37 AM
Hi, im new to this forum... and have never tried poetry as such, so i just started some 15 minutes ago :d Please dont laugh at me I'm just 18 years old here goes....My life was like a flower Just waiting to bloom I was so untouched Until you came my way Then everything changed I knew it was love Because when you left My heart used to cry Oh why oh why Do you give me such pain? And yet, I still love you Why do you play this game? I know that we are meant to be And know that forever we will be together...someday My life was like a cloud So light and grey It was full of hope for a bright sunny day But the day you stepped into my sky My cloud went dry i started to cry.. tears of happiness and sadness too I couldnt control my emotions, I didnt know ehat to do You showed me what life was meant to be But how can you disappear without a trace? How can that be? This angel wipes her bright pink nose And tries to hide, but knows it shows She feels so helpless and lame in love How can you do this to me, o lord above You said that everyones always happy in the end But im not happy So is this the end? IP: Logged |
Virgo-AriesArtist Moderator Posts: 714 From: USA Registered: Nov 2001
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posted August 30, 2003 01:36 PM
Sweet one, Pink Angel...! And no, no one would ever laugh at such an honest and touching expression of heartfelt words. You are welcome to share whatever words strike your mind, all future poetic expressions... We are an open-minded, and caring group. Stick around and you will be glad you did. Love and Lite , a fellow poet and your friendly moderator ------------------ -K "Most people love with restraint As if they were someday to hate We hated gently, carefully As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight IP: Logged |
dafremen Knowflake Posts: 538 From: Registered: Nov 2002
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posted August 30, 2003 03:57 PM
That was very heartfelt and sincere. Thanks for sharing.Daf Oh and welcome to Lindaland! IP: Logged |
purplezen Knowflake Posts: 331 From: outer space Registered: Aug 2003
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posted August 30, 2003 08:45 PM
pink angel, that is a very nice poem. IP: Logged |
Pink Angel Knowflake Posts: 201 From: India Registered: Jul 2003
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posted August 31, 2003 01:28 AM
Thanks for all the encouragement! Hi virgo! Hi daf! Hey purple!! IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 16464 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Nov 2000
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posted August 31, 2003 05:12 AM
------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
Aphrodite Moderator Posts: 3280 From: San Francisco, CA, United States Registered: Feb 2002
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posted September 03, 2003 02:44 PM
Lovely IP: Logged |