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dafremen
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posted September 20, 2003 07:30 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for dafremen     Edit/Delete Message
WHO FEEDS THE BEAST?

The streets are cold
Colder than when they're empty
And the things we're told
As children aren't helping any
Used to know
That I could be anything I wanted to
I was a fool.

What were my dearest dreams
Came shat from slick illusions
The reality
In a tailored mass delusion
Reeks of misery
What exactly did they Teach us back in school?
What did they Do?!

Seems the soul is undisturbed
By the memory of what it was
Still our children's eyes remain
Reflecting what's become of us
Just behind the glitz and glamour
Heaves the heart of a twisted nation
Enterprising APATHISTS
On a SOLD OUT trip to obliteration

STOP filling my head with INFORMATION!

Streets are cold
They've only gotten colder
And how far they go
Before the ride is over's
Not for us to know
Might interrupt production if we knew
Might dull the tool.

The mechanism's unconcerned
With the human waste of what it does
Broken yearning burns a lifetime
Then the beast is done with us
Underneath, the network clamor
Feeds the soul of the corporation
Politicians HIDE their eyes
Down in line buying time at the TV_STATION
(They've got some INFORMATION.)

Step outside the hype and find
A hole concealing what it does
Feeding lies that shut our eyes
To the sickness it instills in us

Beyond a common rumble
Ripen seeds in the soul of a weary nation
Planted by their children's eyes
Growing tall on the promise of liberation!

STOP filling our heads with INFORMATION!
STOP letting them feed us INFORMô_-- TRANSMISSION ENDED --
-- MAIN FEED RESUMED --
(PLAY MSG: RESUME6.MSNBC.MSG)

We now return you to our regularly scheduled programming
..already in progress.

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dafremen
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posted September 21, 2003 08:22 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for dafremen     Edit/Delete Message
Any thoughts? (Not fishing for compliments, looking for dialogue or input.)

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Randall
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posted September 22, 2003 01:27 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message
Very creative.

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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N_wEvil
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posted September 22, 2003 03:26 PM           Edit/Delete Message
it's suitably manic for someone suffering information overload

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Aphrodite
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posted October 02, 2003 02:39 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Aphrodite     Edit/Delete Message
As a political theorist, I can relate.

As an astrologer, the person who wrote that has Uranian transits, probably a square or an opposition. Neptune too. I suspect the 9th house is either natally afflicted or has transits making hard aspects.

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dafremen
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posted October 03, 2003 02:05 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for dafremen     Edit/Delete Message
Would you like to take a gander at his natal?

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Aphrodite
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posted October 03, 2003 11:44 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Aphrodite     Edit/Delete Message
No, no ganders at the writer's chart.

What are your thoughts regarding this poem?

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dafremen
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posted October 03, 2003 03:25 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for dafremen     Edit/Delete Message
Well right off the bat, transiting Uranus is square natal Neptune. Saturn is Transiting the natal 9th house and is conjunct natal Moon, which is also in opposition to transiting Moon now, but probably won't be by the time you read this. Jupiter is conjuct natal Jupiter and is transiting the natal 10th house.

(Oh and Sun is as good as conunct natal Sun..(guess we gots us a soon to be birthday boy..huh?))


(So either our boy is a delusional nutbag, or he's got some pretty profound world changing philosophy running through his head right now. Most likely the former.)


This piece is likely meant to tell the story of some unknown hacker who managed to take hold of MSNBC's main satellite(TELSTAR12) signal, using it to send out a message to millions of people. Somewhere in the middle of his message, MSNBC gets wise and cuts him off, restoring the main network signal feed. He has the message routed to the web, maintaining his anonymity by using a script that automatically redirects text to various forms, and submits them on boards all over the web.

To me it symbolizes the power of a single voice. It shows how a single committed individual has great power. It also symbolizes the struggle of the individual to be heard over the clamor of society and its media machine.

In addition, I think it is a very telling that the themes are almost all Aquarian in nature. Fight the system, think about each other, think about the future, 11:11 (11th house Eleventh sign), technology, mass media, rebellion and awakening.

I also think that the poem is really a song that the poet probably sings to himself in the shower when he thinks nobody's listening.

My favorite parts of the piece?

I like the fact that he gets cut off right as he's saying:

Stop letting them FEED us information

Then he gets cut off and shortly after, we see this message:

--MAIN FEED RESUMED--

(A feed, as most of you are aware, being the industry lingo for a connection to a remote signal.)

The other thing I liked was the throughout the poem, he repeats that they are "filling our heads with information" and the first message visible to viewers after the network restores its signal is:

"We now return you to our regularly scheduled programming..already in progress."

I thought that was about the coolest thing I've written in...I mean I've seen..in a long time.

Daf

P.S. Natal Neptune is in the first house. Sun is in...oh yea..you know already.

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dafremen
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posted April 13, 2004 12:59 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for dafremen     Edit/Delete Message
BUMP
(I was singing this as I walked down the sidewalk this morning.)

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