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posted November 28, 2003 05:49 PM         

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If There Is Tenderness
r. dafremen 6/'03

If there is sweetness
That behind the practiced edge of your indifference
Lingers pennywish-like, wistfully behind
Hint of this to me
A simple subtle tenderness
Whisper-kissed and left between the lines
Matchless prize for one inclined
To chance a meeting in your eyes
Don't be suprised if you should find me
In the saddest parts
Where I almost feel you
I can almost taste your fragrance
Nestled on my lips
A phantom sip drops as a kiss
Almost there in wishful wanderings
A glimpse into your heart is what I've never had
A passing glance is all I'd ask of you
For mine beats true
Times its rythmn to foreverness
Finds purpose in togetherness
Anticipates, awaits
Some sort of hopeful sign from you.

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From: NC
Registered: Jul 2003

posted December 05, 2003 11:29 AM         

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I have a booklet written in gold ink on colored construction paper of all my angst ridden love poetry -- a present to my Mother one Christmas when i had no money. I have it back now -- collecting dust.

I hear ya, Daf.

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From: Columbus, GA USA
Registered: Nov 2000

posted December 24, 2003 01:06 PM         

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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