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Topic: i ego
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dafremen Knowflake Posts: 981 From: Registered: Nov 2002
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posted January 21, 2004 01:26 PM
Ever stare your own oblivion Straight in the face Breathed it down And liked the feel Because you were one on one with everything?If you never have Please do not tell me you understand What I'm going through When about the farthest thing from your mind Is what I'm feeling for A hunger fed on union Longing for that reunion With my Beloved once again A sob inside and still me hides away Alone and so afraid In this so-called "sanity" (It's not what it used to be) Can't help but feel as if the I inside Brought this all upon himself Seems kinda strange in a way to tell What a quirky anomaly I am Me staring at I's tortured face I focused on that empty place Begins to cry Torn between the ego's will to be And the soul's desire Twists a bit inside Egos hate goodbyes. IP: Logged |
TINK Knowflake Posts: 989 From: New England Registered: Mar 2003
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posted January 21, 2004 05:25 PM
"Egos hate goodbyes" Perfect.
daf, you always get the ending just right. IP: Logged |
divinia Knowflake Posts: 285 From: The Crossroads of America Registered: Mar 2003
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posted January 21, 2004 10:20 PM
So glad you are back, Dafremen! Your presence has been missed. Now about that divine perception..... Sincerely, divinia P.S. Love the poem! Very Freudian! ------------------ What wisdom can you find that is greater than kindness? -- Jean-Jacques Rousseau IP: Logged |
dafremen Knowflake Posts: 981 From: Registered: Nov 2002
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posted February 19, 2004 06:37 PM
You are both very dear to me. Just so you know.daf IP: Logged |