Posts: 208
From: Victoria, Australia
Registered: Jan 2004

posted February 05, 2004 10:05 PM         

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My neighbour wrote a song, she is a lovely woman, in her 50's I met 6 months ago when I moved in. She is not a writer, nor a poet. But she said to me something came to her and she needed a pen and paper quick. And she composed a song. She gave it to me, and I said I will post it and get some feedback for her. She is really interested to know what people say about what she has written. I think its quite lovely, and has more than one meaning.

She hasnt yet titled it.

"Im travelling down the highway
Im cruising all the way
Thinking of my destination
Dreaming of what to say

Many more miles to go
Many more signs ahead
Dreaming of the good times
And the greetings to be said

My journey's nearly over
As the time moves slowly on
The signs keep coming upon me
Boldly showing me how long

The road ahead is wide open
The end is almost in sight
The trop is nearly over
I'll be there before night

And now as I turn the corner
I see before me a light
I've made the trip safely
Thank God I got here all right"

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From: Columbus, GA USA
Registered: Nov 2000

posted February 06, 2004 01:11 PM         

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Nice beat.

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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From: Victoria, Australia
Registered: Jan 2004

posted February 15, 2004 07:00 PM         

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Thanks, anyone else? what do you think?

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From: Bangalore, Karnataka, India
Registered: Nov 2003

posted February 15, 2004 10:48 PM         

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I think it was great. Keep up the good work.

pocco

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From: Columbus, GA USA
Registered: Nov 2000

posted February 16, 2004 02:38 PM         

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Love things with multiple meanings.

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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