Posts: 3
From: New Franklin, MO, USA
Registered: Apr 2004

posted April 12, 2004 12:48 AM         

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You don't remember, you refuse to remember
The night you asked me to dance
So long ago
But only in time
Still lost in the depths of a mind
I know it happened
You won't believe
Too many years gone by
For some reason I wait
Holding my breath
Hoping love comes before death

Another time
Some other place
Maybe you believed, and I didn't
We'll make the pirouette once again
Complete the dance in a lifetime
I breathe my breath
And you yours
Holding to the resolve
Holding with what's left
Hoping love comes before death

I wrote this 13 years ago adn can still remember how it poured out of me with no effort. I'd like to hear others' thoughts on it as it still comes to mind when I least expect it. Thank You. LLL

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