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Topic: Happy?
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lovely libra Knowflake Posts: 109 From: garland texas usa Registered: Mar 2004
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posted April 30, 2004 03:57 PM
This one is from 1999 I was suposedly happy at the time but this came bubling to the surface.She screams silently Through ever smiling lips No one can see the huricane in her soul Through the mask of sunshine on her face There is a distant memory that Uncried tears were poison She laughs and wishes it worked faster
------------------ ~Renee ~indecision may or may not be my problem IP: Logged |
silverbells Knowflake Posts: 1100 From: maryland Registered: Apr 2003
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posted April 30, 2004 06:09 PM
You wrote this lovely? I appreciate melancholy poems that offer insight into the subject's motivations.IP: Logged |
lovely libra Knowflake Posts: 109 From: garland texas usa Registered: Mar 2004
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posted May 05, 2004 10:45 AM
yes I wrote it. i was suposed to be in the best relationship of my life. he was a dreamy pices. But things where wrong I knew it, i denied it even to myself but I knew it. He left me in 2002. I write much happier now(well kid of) I wrote so be it as well. Thank you for your response.------------------ ~Renee ~indecision may or may not be my problem IP: Logged |
dafremen Knowflake Posts: 677 From: Registered: Nov 2002
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posted May 06, 2004 01:52 PM
Very nice, lovely sun sister. The poison tears and their regretfully slow effectiveness were especially nice work.daf IP: Logged |