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lovely libra
Knowflake

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From: garland texas usa
Registered: Mar 2004

posted April 30, 2004 03:57 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for lovely libra     Edit/Delete Message
This one is from 1999
I was suposedly happy at the time but this came bubling to the surface.

She screams silently
Through ever smiling lips
No one can see the huricane in her soul
Through the mask of sunshine on her face
There is a distant memory that
Uncried tears were poison
She laughs
and wishes it worked faster

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~Renee
~indecision may or may not be my problem

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silverbells
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From: maryland
Registered: Apr 2003

posted April 30, 2004 06:09 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for silverbells     Edit/Delete Message
You wrote this lovely? I appreciate melancholy poems that offer insight into the subject's motivations.

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lovely libra
Knowflake

Posts: 109
From: garland texas usa
Registered: Mar 2004

posted May 05, 2004 10:45 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for lovely libra     Edit/Delete Message
yes I wrote it. i was suposed to be in the best relationship of my life. he was a dreamy pices. But things where wrong I knew it, i denied it even to myself but I knew it. He left me in 2002. I write much happier now(well kid of) I wrote so be it as well. Thank you for your response.

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~Renee
~indecision may or may not be my problem

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dafremen
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posted May 06, 2004 01:52 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for dafremen     Edit/Delete Message
Very nice, lovely sun sister. The poison tears and their regretfully slow effectiveness were especially nice work.

daf

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