Posts: 370
From: Taipei, Taiwan
Registered: Jan 2004

posted July 05, 2004 03:28 AM         

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Don't say you love me
If you pity me
I'd rather remain alone
Even though I'm not happy

With you, I feel no more pain
As if my tears are washed away by spring rain
But you must know, I'm the most misfortunate creature
In me, you will find no pleasure

Don't say you love me
If you don't
I could beg you to take care of me
But I won't

I remember those moments
We enjoyed them to the full like children
But things are no longer the same
Stay away from me, I am a shame

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Dana

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From: Melbourne Victoria Australia
Registered: Oct 2004

posted September 22, 2005 05:22 AM         

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Hi, I am Vanessa
I liked your poem! Very sad. Self hate is definately the way to destruction. I am learning that self love is the only way, that is where it starts. anyway, keep writing there is a time for all emotions, and sadness can indeed help to get to gladness.

love

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From: Stafford, VA USA
Registered: Feb 2005

posted September 22, 2005 11:26 AM         

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From: ireland
Registered: Sep 2004

posted September 22, 2005 12:28 PM         

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From: dreamland
Registered: Jan 2004

posted October 14, 2005 02:22 AM         

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oh passenger where are you!!!

i miss you so much!please do show up!

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From: Pleasanton, CA, USA
Registered: May 2005

posted October 14, 2005 05:10 PM         

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I like that name, and the Iggy Pop song (The Passenger) as well.

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