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Topic: Really....
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pixelpixie Knowflake Posts: 4288 From: Ontario, Canada Registered: Aug 2003
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posted September 25, 2004 02:14 AM
I ache. It has been so long since I felt this raw and primal. Like a dandilion stripped. A velvety petal, a little ripped It feels so real. After so many illusions, refreshing, really.. to feel. And the thoughts that pour, like a heart in a blender Taking me through this vast surrender. Increments I measure, this telescopic relationship beats wearily with every pumping blasting life into something so full yet still plumping. We''ve gone through all the stages quietly, whispered through the rages and the unrequitted claims. Words needn't be said at this juncture it is unneccesary and unnamed. Yet it still leaves a stain. This ache leaves me painfully aware of wanting to find a pleasure there. No need.... we've planted the seed but the Sun can't come out to dazzle the garden that could be between you and me.But we'll be fine... Really. IP: Logged |
paras Knowflake Posts: 1154 From: the Heart of It All Registered: May 2004
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posted September 25, 2004 05:31 PM
Beautiful as always, Pix... you really know how to convey your emotions in your writing. IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 19085 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Nov 2000
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posted September 28, 2004 10:42 AM
------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
Charlotte Knowflake Posts: 251 From: Tn. USA Registered: Apr 2004
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posted October 09, 2004 03:26 AM
wow! IP: Logged |