Posts: 4288
From: Ontario, Canada
Registered: Aug 2003

posted September 25, 2004 02:14 AM         

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I ache.
It has been so long since I felt this raw and primal.
Like a dandilion stripped.
A velvety petal, a little ripped
It feels so real.
After so many illusions, refreshing, really.. to feel.
And the thoughts that pour, like a heart in a blender
Taking me through this vast surrender.
Increments I measure,
this telescopic relationship
beats wearily with every pumping
blasting life into something so full yet still plumping.
We''ve gone through all the stages
quietly,
whispered
through
the rages and the unrequitted
claims.
Words needn't be said at this juncture
it is unneccesary
and unnamed.
Yet it still leaves a stain.
This ache leaves me painfully aware
of wanting to find a pleasure there.
No need....
we've planted the seed
but the Sun can't come out to dazzle the garden
that could be
between you and me.

But we'll be fine...

Really.

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Posts: 1154
From: the Heart of It All
Registered: May 2004

posted September 25, 2004 05:31 PM         

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Beautiful as always, Pix... you really know how to convey your emotions in your writing.

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Posts: 19085
From: Columbus, GA USA
Registered: Nov 2000

posted September 28, 2004 10:42 AM         

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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Posts: 251
From: Tn. USA
Registered: Apr 2004

posted October 09, 2004 03:26 AM         

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wow!

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