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Topic: Hiding My Love Away
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Eternal Blue Knowflake Posts: 28 From: Registered: Aug 2004
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posted September 30, 2004 12:33 PM
Every time you gazed at me and smiled I'd be left tremendously beguiled Do you know? I'm churning, yearning, burningFor YOU I'm trying to hide This feeling inside I'm afraid you will see These secret tides within me I try to act like I don't care I know, to you nothing can compare I am pushing you away The cold words I don't mean to say Your deed of compassion Sows the seeds of my passion But you'll never belong to me Your heart, your soul, your divine body Every time I see you and look away In spite of it, it still makes my day Do you know? You're purified, beautified, glorified To me I long to see your smile again To feel that dearest, sweetest pain!
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butterflyeyes Knowflake Posts: 86 From: Gulfport,Mississippi, USA Registered: Sep 2004
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posted September 30, 2004 12:52 PM
Eternal Blue, Butterflyeyes I-like!!! IP: Logged |
silverbells Knowflake Posts: 1346 From: maryland Registered: Apr 2003
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posted September 30, 2004 07:40 PM
/ / ------------------ Get some love in your groove, just get hip to forgive... - Michael Franks IP: Logged |
Eternal Blue Knowflake Posts: 28 From: Registered: Aug 2004
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posted September 30, 2004 07:53 PM
Thank you butterflyeyes and silverbells!! IP: Logged |
peace_23 Knowflake Posts: 31 From: orillia, canada Registered: Dec 2002
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posted October 01, 2004 01:09 PM
I love your poem, it's great ! I feel exactly that way! When I hear that song by the Beatles, "You've Got To Hide Your Love Away" it reminds me I shouldn't hide my love, what good is your love when hidden, right? LOVE & LIGHT!!!!!! IP: Logged |
Eternal Blue Knowflake Posts: 28 From: Registered: Aug 2004
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posted October 01, 2004 11:29 PM
Thank U peace_23! Love should not be hidden! IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 19053 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Nov 2000
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posted October 02, 2004 03:20 PM
------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
Eternal Blue Knowflake Posts: 28 From: Registered: Aug 2004
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posted October 04, 2004 05:52 AM
Thanks Randall IP: Logged |
Heart&Soul Knowflake Posts: 16 From: Registered: Sep 2004
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posted October 06, 2004 02:00 AM
"that dearest, sweetest pain" Yes, it is isn't it? Beautifully worded, Blue. IP: Logged |
Eternal Blue Knowflake Posts: 28 From: Registered: Aug 2004
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posted October 06, 2004 08:14 AM
Thanks for the praise Heart&Soul! IP: Logged |