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Eternal Blue
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posted October 14, 2004 05:54 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Eternal Blue     Edit/Delete Message
As the mid-afternoon sun shines
Insouciantly I walk by
The river beside the golden shrines
With a holy, holy eye
Closest to the empire's sky
A view that so much inclines

I arrive at a place green and bright
Where the grand palace is nigh;
There are young and fine ladies in white
The summer air is cool and dry;
There is no need to wonder why
This is a city of great delight

Young and old, rich and poor
From all over doth come hither;
One can always get more and more
The gentry, artists or a worker;
The morrow will always present splendour
Welcoming all like a wide open door

Tho' some may need to struggle
This marvellous beauty one can't deny;
One will never find this place dull
And will fall for her should he try;
Many can have such spirits high
This city, of which elegance is full

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aqua
Knowflake

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Registered: Jan 2004

posted October 14, 2004 02:38 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for aqua     Edit/Delete Message
man how do u manage to write so many poems ,that too such nice one's.

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Eternal Blue
Knowflake

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posted October 14, 2004 07:16 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Eternal Blue     Edit/Delete Message
First of all, thanks aqua. Me? I don't consider that I've written that much. I just jot things down whenever I've got inspiration and I let it flow. I love poetry (but what matters is not quantity, but quality, and that's my weakness).

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aqua
Knowflake

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From: dreamland
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posted October 28, 2004 11:04 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for aqua     Edit/Delete Message
o.......... come on u write really well!

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Eternal Blue
Knowflake

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posted October 28, 2004 05:42 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Eternal Blue     Edit/Delete Message
Thank U for the sweet reply, aqua! I just want to say "thank U, thank U, thank U!" Thanks for reading!

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