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Topic: Dissolve
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paras Knowflake Posts: 1252 From: the Heart of It All Registered: May 2004
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posted October 18, 2004 06:09 PM
the sun came out and shines today but i wish it hadn't i want the dark skies, the gray-blue clouds the rainwater the receptive element they say the ocean has no memory and angry crowds are calmed with a hose i think i just want to stand in the rain and feel it all wash away too bad i'm not water-soluble it could wash me away... IP: Logged |
aqua Knowflake Posts: 700 From: dreamland Registered: Jan 2004
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posted October 19, 2004 03:01 AM
wonderful PARAS!IP: Logged |
paras Knowflake Posts: 1252 From: the Heart of It All Registered: May 2004
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posted October 19, 2004 04:19 AM
You're too kind, Aqua. Especially considering this isn't really a poem -- more like a ramble...IP: Logged |
pixelpixie Knowflake Posts: 4460 From: Ontario, Canada Registered: Aug 2003
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posted October 19, 2004 03:48 PM
Come stand next to this water, I'll give you all the grey you need.IP: Logged |
aqua Knowflake Posts: 700 From: dreamland Registered: Jan 2004
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posted October 24, 2004 01:37 AM
oh now u r making me feel embarressed!IP: Logged |
Eternal Blue Knowflake Posts: 67 From: Registered: Aug 2004
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posted October 24, 2004 06:45 AM
This IS a POEM. Never say anything like that, paras, it's a moving one. You told exactly how I used to feel... thanks for sharing! IP: Logged |