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paras
Knowflake

Posts: 1252
From: the Heart of It All
Registered: May 2004

posted October 18, 2004 06:09 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for paras     Edit/Delete Message
the sun came out and shines today
but i wish it hadn't
i want the dark skies, the gray-blue clouds
the rain

water
the receptive element
they say the ocean has no memory
and angry crowds are calmed with a hose
i think i just want to stand in the rain
and feel it all wash away

too bad i'm not water-soluble
it could wash me away...

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aqua
Knowflake

Posts: 700
From: dreamland
Registered: Jan 2004

posted October 19, 2004 03:01 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for aqua     Edit/Delete Message

wonderful PARAS!

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paras
Knowflake

Posts: 1252
From: the Heart of It All
Registered: May 2004

posted October 19, 2004 04:19 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for paras     Edit/Delete Message
You're too kind, Aqua. Especially considering this isn't really a poem -- more like a ramble...

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pixelpixie
Knowflake

Posts: 4460
From: Ontario, Canada
Registered: Aug 2003

posted October 19, 2004 03:48 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for pixelpixie     Edit/Delete Message
Come stand next to this water, I'll give you all the grey you need.

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aqua
Knowflake

Posts: 700
From: dreamland
Registered: Jan 2004

posted October 24, 2004 01:37 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for aqua     Edit/Delete Message
oh now u r making me feel embarressed!

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Eternal Blue
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Registered: Aug 2004

posted October 24, 2004 06:45 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Eternal Blue     Edit/Delete Message
This IS a POEM. Never say anything like that, paras, it's a moving one. You told exactly how I used to feel... thanks for sharing!

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