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Topic: I'm Telling You Silently
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Eternal Blue Knowflake Posts: 129 From: Registered: Aug 2004
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posted October 20, 2004 08:31 AM
In the morning I wake up The first thing that comes into mind Is you At night Before I fall asleep You Will always linger in my head But I dare not call your name For I would shatter at the very moment I did it Everyday I'm getting closer and closer to you But everyday You seem to be drifting further away Does this sound contradictory? (I know it does) No one will ever understand We are meant to part some day But I'm not ready to let you go But you will have to let go You will have to let go... And I wonder Was it me who Made this side of you Show I can't ask you to promise me To never change I'm making a wish Which is 'Do maintain your innocence' If only it could come true But as somebody said 'Only Heaven knows' If only I had the guts to say it to you Those powerful words But my lips forbid me to do so... I don't want you to hold my hand I don't want your arms around me I don't want your kisses I don't want your sweet caress I just want you to stay To stay here To stay where you are So I won't stumble (But one day...) You make everything meaningful And you have no idea All these words simply cannot express How I feel... I'm shouting it out loud From the bottom of my heart Do you hear me?(This is not a poem, just a combination of words about something personal) IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 19796 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Nov 2000
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posted October 21, 2004 12:01 PM
------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
aqua Knowflake Posts: 783 From: dreamland Registered: Jan 2004
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posted October 22, 2004 03:09 AM
a very nice one indeed!IP: Logged |
pixelpixie Moderator Posts: 5004 From: Ontario, Canada Registered: Aug 2003
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posted October 22, 2004 12:24 PM
For sure!!!! I'm hearing you.IP: Logged |
Sheaa Olein Moderator Posts: 1302 From: In the office, UK Registered: Jul 2004
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posted October 22, 2004 12:33 PM
Very cool IP: Logged |
Eternal Blue Knowflake Posts: 129 From: Registered: Aug 2004
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posted October 23, 2004 05:16 AM
Thank you heaps, Randall , aqua, pixelpixie and Sheaa Olein! I was away for a while and will probably write less, but at least I will still write! IP: Logged |
Sheaa Olein Moderator Posts: 1302 From: In the office, UK Registered: Jul 2004
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posted October 23, 2004 05:26 AM
quote: No one will ever understand We are meant to part some day But I'm not ready to let you go But you will have to let go You will have to let go... And I wonder Was it me who Made this side of you Show
I had to rush my reply before, but I love this bit because it relates to the title of the poem - well for me it does. It's how I've tormented myself with questions about a love before. Knowflake poetry is cool for self-healing sometimes. Makes you feel like you're all sharing what you interpret, and therefore a little more stored up pain is released to be viewed and cleaned up ------------------ "We see everything through a glass, darkly. Sometimes we can peer through the glass and catch a glimpse of what is on the other side. If we were to polish the glass clean, we'd see much more. But then we would no longer see ourselves." From 'Deep Quotes'
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Eternal Blue Knowflake Posts: 129 From: Registered: Aug 2004
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posted October 24, 2004 07:20 AM
I'm pleased to see that someone out there does relate to this. I agree with you, Sheaa- this is a good place for us knowflakes to share our feelings and to appreciate one another's works. AND I did feel better after posting this...although the uncertainty is still right here, deep inside... IP: Logged |